What do toi guy's think of my character?

I l’amour it!

two dimensional and cliche af tbh

Is she supposed to be a vocaloid ou something? Either way she seems aight. Maybe a little too cliche though. And maybe toi should make her hair a certain color not rainbow

I don't like the art too much....

She sounds AND looks like your typical animé character. Her anatomy is, um...strange. Way too cliche.

ngl alessandras a bland character
yes, she can do all these things, but that is exactly what kills her. shes too much in a single package. it seems everyone likes her and is amazed par her, her popularitys exceeded thus far that she can make her own CDs and sell them independently. there is no struggle, there are no faults stated, she is what anyone would strive to be and that is what makes her completely unappealing. toi may be able to showcase this sort of character and have them appreicated par a limited audience. i guarentee toi that a majority of people may not take this character very lightly and see them as "over the top" ou as some users have been stating "cliche"

when it comes to the design there are WAAAAAAAAAAY too many colors. color directs the eyes to focus on a specific area but looking at alessandra i dont even know where to begin. the multi colored hair is an eyesore when mixed in w/ the colored outfit. everythings just very bright and while i can understand if this was done b/cause of the lack of any other couleurs its still too much. i dont even know whats on her head (ears?? a bow??)

what i would recommend jic tl;dr is that toi run your character through a mary sue test and give her some sort of antagonist and flaws. get rid of whatever isnt necessary to make her a singer. yes, she can do gymnastics but on the side and even then she doesnt have to be astounding at it. hell, make her lousy at it to counter the concept that she is some sort of superhuman mary sue

on a side note i envy your handwriting b/cause that is gorgeous

basically everything shadowmarioking said.

I totally agree with shadowmarioking and no I'm not impressed par your character

Total Mary-sue. Sorry, but toi need to fix her a little. 'she had gotten her body in shape to be one of the most dedicated members there are', 'uses the moves she learned in gymnastics such as hand springs and cartwheels to perform on stage (such as at talent shows)', and 'Not only that, but alot of people at her université is so amazed par her beauty, talent and fashion sense that she's slowly becoming plus populaire as the days go on' scream Mary-sue. Also the name Alessandra Sofia is totally Mary-sue. I think toi have great potential for a good character and plot though.

Sorry but your character really sounds really cliche. She sounds like a typical character honestly. toi should really kind of change a lot of things. I'll send toi some references if toi want. The Italy part was really original though.

Looks great. Good Job!

I'm really sorry about this but, I think your character is way too cliche. Your character seems like it's good at almost everything and is very populaire and smart. Those kind of characters are nice and admired but she's... too good at everything. Which takes out all of the interests in the character. The Italian part about her is interesting and unique though.

it feels vague and has too much success and not enough challenge. i mean i can sum it up like this... she shows up in the US from Italy, goes to college, had a very stereotypical immigrant dream = "become famous", was a Mary Sue in college, becomes famous... the end.

where's the challenge, where's the conflict? to make a good character toi need to give the character flaws that stick, like stage fright ou bad sinning voice...

if toi were to say that she always wanted to be a pop étoile, star and had written so many good songs but her voice wasn't good enough to express them ou get them recognized then the character would be plus interesting and would make for a better story. and maybe she's getting bad grades in one class because wasting time in class écriture new songs ou something... to say she's just 'story perfect' is kinda... overdone and uninteresting.

give her something that's not desirable, a flaw, a mistake, a screw up, and then her character becomes plus complete and original.

the drawing wasn't bad though, much better than anything i could have drawn. the hair was a little overdone on color but... to every man his own i guess.

Mary sue, total cliche storm