my speech for class captain!!!

Sorry for bothering toi with this again!!!!!!


"Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen we are gathered here today to learn Irish, but we took some time off that to choose a new class leader.

(this paragraph is just if I go last, I hope I do)For starters I would like to compliment my fellow rivals Atrio and Liam, for their good effort - Liam toi even prepared a speech, very impressive(I have it learned of par cœur, coeur so It will look like I'm winging it, and saying it if he actually reads from his speech obviously)

Now..I realise the privelage to have the honour torepresent your class, however I am confident that I will be a great candidate.

I'm taking part in this not only to add a girl to the mixor that I genuinely like public speaking, but because I am enthusiastic, responsible, organised and most of all I enjoy helping my peers if it's possible!

I would l’amour to become the new captain of class captain to ensure that this fine class stays as great as i is for it's final an together.

and since Ms. Seoige(our Irish teacher) a dit to add something Irish I'm going to end my speech with saying- probably with bad pronounciation. Vótaíl dom(meaning vote for me in Irish, and I'm bad at pronouncing stuff in Irish - I'm not even Irish and I have to do this subject!!)

Thanxx for lire - what do toi think of it any quick suggestions??Comments??