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Is this something that would catch your interest in a book?
I'm trying to write a novel, and I'm wondering if this is a good piece to be put in it.
"AKANE!!," I screamed. Taking my fist, I swung it at a tree. My arm went limp. Cold, wet snow hit my face as my body flung itself towards the ground. A warm hand touched my shoulder. "I think it's time to go, Daichi." I was lifted up par my shoulders and dragged across the snow. I was taken into a house. My house. I opened my eyes back up to see that Chouko had brought me back in and had left me suivant to the couch. I sat back upand saw Neko sitting at the table, waiting for Chouko to come back and finish their card game.
"Welcome back, Daichi!," Neko said, smiling at me. Her big green cat eyes stood out from the shining black hair that almost went down to her waist. Looking at her reminded me of how dull my hair was, hanging over my back.
I climed up onto the canapé and layed down. Pain swelled throughout my stomach and legs. Trying to change positions would hurt to much, and would also mean plus blood on the couch. I looked up, staring at the wall. My leg was still bleeding, reminding me of what Akane was trying to make me look like..............a faliure.
"Are toi okay, Daichi?!," a dit Chouko, covering her mouth. She looked terrifyed, like half of my face had been eaten off, ou something was controlling me.
"I'm fine, Chouko," I said. "Just get me something for my leg, please." I looked down at my leg, still bleeding. The last time something like this happend was when Akane sent out a assasin to hunt me down and kill me, along with the exception of paying him. I was a witch hunter, not a Wielder.
Chouko took my leg and pressed a wet towel on to it. Once again, pain took over my legs and waist. My fingers dug into the pillow, some finger going deep into it.
"You really shouldn't be going out in this type of weather. I can't see a thing when I try to go hunting out there," a dit Chouko, dipping the towel into a bucket suivant to the canapé that was fillied half way with wa
"AKANE!!," I screamed. Taking my fist, I swung it at a tree. My arm went limp. Cold, wet snow hit my face as my body flung itself towards the ground. A warm hand touched my shoulder. "I think it's time to go, Daichi." I was lifted up par my shoulders and dragged across the snow. I was taken into a house. My house. I opened my eyes back up to see that Chouko had brought me back in and had left me suivant to the couch. I sat back upand saw Neko sitting at the table, waiting for Chouko to come back and finish their card game.
"Welcome back, Daichi!," Neko said, smiling at me. Her big green cat eyes stood out from the shining black hair that almost went down to her waist. Looking at her reminded me of how dull my hair was, hanging over my back.
I climed up onto the canapé and layed down. Pain swelled throughout my stomach and legs. Trying to change positions would hurt to much, and would also mean plus blood on the couch. I looked up, staring at the wall. My leg was still bleeding, reminding me of what Akane was trying to make me look like..............a faliure.
"Are toi okay, Daichi?!," a dit Chouko, covering her mouth. She looked terrifyed, like half of my face had been eaten off, ou something was controlling me.
"I'm fine, Chouko," I said. "Just get me something for my leg, please." I looked down at my leg, still bleeding. The last time something like this happend was when Akane sent out a assasin to hunt me down and kill me, along with the exception of paying him. I was a witch hunter, not a Wielder.
Chouko took my leg and pressed a wet towel on to it. Once again, pain took over my legs and waist. My fingers dug into the pillow, some finger going deep into it.
"You really shouldn't be going out in this type of weather. I can't see a thing when I try to go hunting out there," a dit Chouko, dipping the towel into a bucket suivant to the canapé that was fillied half way with wa
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