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Could Anyone Help Me With Constructive Critism???

Okay, so I wrote this story, and I need toi guys and gals to help me! Helpful words only, and that would be awesome! Please, don't be mean ou rude, ou say anything like that. I'm a budding writer. Kay? Here's the link: link
 FashionBug12 posted il y a plus d’un an
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Zero_Delta said:
Sorta read it. Not bad, just remember to check your spelling, grammar, ect.
Also, indenting will help seperate paragraphs.
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Try mine: [url=yoururl]link
Zero_Delta posted il y a plus d’un an
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