Yo all u boys on fan pop the first guy who helps me gets 10 hommages

Ok I have a story and I want a guys point of view on it like what do u think of the guy characters cuz I'm having a hard Time w/ it and Iean it the first one that helps me gets 10 props. basically its about this girl who like her bf is an alcoholic and like he hurts her and stuff so one jour after a football game he followed her (this is a rutine, only if they lose the game which is like every time lol) accueil and also a boy named will followed her to now like i a dit the bf is drunk so like she stops him.... but she doesnt know how she did it she just all of a sudden made hime stop like something was in his way but nothing was.... this is the summery of the very beginnning basically so... Ok this was the smart for the very beginning