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write a poem (at least 4 lines) and best touch will get 5 props!

Mine:

I'm right here
numb like a stick
you're right there
start to look sick

face to face
our eyes were sob
I fly to space
and toi stay gob

as feu and water
we hardly match
that doesn't matter
'cause I won't catch

just an example, but go ahead make one!
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ShiningsTar542 said:
its my last poem...Calls(My Life)
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i live under the ground.no water?!

its my life

i live underground water,yes there is a water.but there isnt air?!

its my life

i live up on the sky,yes there is air.but there arent dreams?!

its my life

i live under the bed(strange?!) to feel the dreams,but they just a nightmares?!
what?!
why?!
where?!
no answer?!

its my life

i feel soo cold.no hot?!

its my life

i live close to the hell for the Warmth,but its burning me.so i ask "no cold"?

its my life

run,run,run..but where?
idk
its my life

scream,scream,scream..but why?
idk
its my life

search,search,search..but for what?
for some1 help?
maybe yes maybe no!
even i need a help,but all of the ppl need my help too.
so the answer is yes/no,why?

its my life

do i hate?
do i love?
but who do i hate,who do i love?

its my life

do i hate my life?
yes?
yes
but why?
cz i cant l’amour it

its my life

keeps searchin for something lost,but i dont know what it is..or where i can find it
i give up i cant find it

its my life

live in the paradise.yes i do..but its as hell
why?
cz there arent ppl in it

its my life

it is the end?
but the end for what?
its the end for my life?
yes it is
now i think i know what i was searchin for
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OMG l’amour IT!
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so wonderful, I'd a cursed life berfore...
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Monrose said:
I am horny
I am cool
I like hot guys
they make me drool

This is my birthday
Yippy yippy yey
I got a new car
and it is grey (no really... It is red)

Everybody loves me
I am the best
I don't like losers
They make me depressed

This is my poem
I worked really hard
If toi don't like it
You're a big, fat retard

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MDR <3
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MrOrange16 posted il y a plus d’un an
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lmao!!
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great poem
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taytrain97 said:
(I write stories out of poems, so this is really long ^^;)

There was a young girl
Her future was bright
She was quiet and shy
but got everything right
Always the first to raise her hand,
Never the last to leave
Her parents knew they had
a prodigy on the lead.

She was quiet and modest,
and she didn't seem to have friends,
and she'd ask to stay inside and read
Instead of following to the playground's ends.
Surely but slowly,
Daily and nightly,
this girl would always dream.
Not of only being successful, but
Making it on the silver screen.

The last day, she was allowed to perform,
her hands began to shake
her shyness tried to choke her,
but she didn't let it let her cœur, coeur break.
The song was long, the phrases strong,
No matter the quick, uneven pauses,
Because everyone's eyes were now on her
And she wasn't about to give her losses.

That last day, and her first performance,
No one a dit a word.
It was expected, for this girl
wasn't necessarily down-to-earth.
But as she walked down the concrete
To the yellow escape to home,
She heard someone behind her
and suddenly faced a friendly stranger.

"Hey, girl in the tie-dye!
toi finally turned around?
I saw the performance; I didn't think
toi had that kind of sound!"

The stranger laughed, and that person saw
the sparkle in the girl's eyes.
She patted her back and walked away
as teh girl's shyness started to die.
She stepped onto the tall, dark stairs to the bus,
and was greeted par many whispers.
"It's that girl who sang in the Talent Show,
that girl in the tie-dyed shirt!"

She smiled brightly, on haut, retour au début of the world,
and bounced into her siège happily.
Her best friend saw her face and grinned.
"What's got toi so peppy?"
The girl smiled even brighter,
and she happily replied,
"I'm the girl in the tie-dyed shirt
and I'm really loving life!"
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That's awesome! (The odd part is that my sis was playing sad musique near the second-to-last stanza XP)
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xDD Nice. And thanks :D
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best one*
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iluvllllll said:
I wrote this a an ago, enjoy.


Beaming over my shoulders
I felt a tender breeze,
As I pace along the beach,
Thunders started to rumble,
As delicated as it seems,
It was magnificent and fearless.

Unexpectedly,
A splendor dream filled my tears,
There I was,
Trembling across the mansion.
Unbelivable,
I conceived them in Colors.
Messing with my mind,
As I tried to define the definition.
Desprate as I tried to palpate it,
I felt a pressure....

Deep down I fell,
I came to conscious that I was drifting from the scene,
As horrifying as it sounds,
A lightning cracked through my thoughts,
There I as,
Eavesdropping over a gorgeous scenery.


Okay I know this sounds kinda weird but I wrote this based on a painting. Oh and i wrote that whe I was eleven.

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It's brilliant! My friend kind of writes the way toi do...What painting was it based on? :)
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it was drawn par mah' friend, she drew a bunch of 3D boxes and colored them with water color, to me it looked lke a mansion so thats how i came up with the whole weird poem :DX
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Lovely one! *get props*
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sapherequeen said:
The eyes of the innocent
Stare into your face
As toi watch them go
And vanish without a trace

The howl of the wolf
Is so clear through the rain
And if toi listen closely
To his howl, there is pain

The weeping of a girl
Who holds her brother's head
Is one of my many images
Of the mourning for the dead

And alone I sit here..
And in my fist, a blood-thirsty knife
While thinking of the few things
That strangely form what is life.


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This poem doesn't really have a story ou anything of the sort behind it. It was just...well, random.....
sapherequeen posted il y a plus d’un an
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wow tahts all i can say is wow I LOOOVE ITTTT
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so cool! reminds me of something...*get props*
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xxXsk8trXxx said:
Why are poems so emo?
Why are poems so sad?
All these depressing poems going around...
They just make me mad.

Mr. Poe was awesome,
Ms. Lockhart was pretty good,
But with all of these crappy poems going around,
gothique horror these days is misunderstood.

So please learn how to write better,
And make happy poems as well,
We don't care about bloody love,
But we want these poems to go to hell.
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Best answer T.T
taytrain97 posted il y a plus d’un an
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FANX.
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uh...nice one ;)
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l’amour this. xD Good thing mine's not emo ou sad!
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silverandgreen7 said:
This sounds fun! :)
I wrote this SONNET a few months il y a for our Shakespeare subject.
It was kind of inspired par Katniss Everdeen from the Hunger Games.

I am a bird, free from hurt, free from strife
Free to fly to the skies, escape the world
I am able to live a fearless life
I can see the crowds below as I soared
I am free to go wherever I wish
No restraints can tie me down, not one leash
I make no sound as I glide through the air
When I sing my song, toi know I am there
I am as majestic as a lion
Always with my flock, rare am I alone
I twitter, chirp, on a branch on a tree
I hunt for what I need, as toi may see
When I land on your window, do not mope
I am the symbol of freedom, of hope.

:)
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very praiseful...
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Thank toi :)
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cutiegirl01 said:
In the dark I die
Scared and alone
Keeping me in the dark
No one ever sees
That who they see
Is not the real me
So scared and alone
I die till I see
toi come as the son of night
So I wait in my dark despair.
Can anyone save me
Does any body know
that I am dieing
and I am alone?
Save me
from what I have become
alone and broken
the life of me is draining
I have nothing
to live for
but I know that
I am holding on for toi
I am holding on for that
I am dieing
please come save me
from my dark despair
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so tragic 0.T but good poem...
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uniquezandy said:
ill try but im not that good.

What could I do? Was it a dream ou an endless nightmere? Yet no one could make this choice but me. I was trapped in darkness, trying to find light... WAKE UP. No it was a nightmare. They come when toi least expect it. Try and dream it, it still continues. Try and scream it, toi go back to lit and it still continues. It must die. It must.
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lemon1110 said:
All the years that pass us,
toi dont know.
toi never made a fuss,
especially when i told you;
toi are in l’amour with me,
and im in l’amour with toi too.
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milkachoco said:
toi l’amour me, toi hate me.
toi want me, toi lose me.
toi need me, toi can't hear me.

On one side of the road toi see me
but toi can't feel me.

toi are here but I'm not there.
toi may l’amour me, but who cares.

I'm just telling you
Please, GO AWAY!
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lol, great poem XD *get props*
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NomyCake said:
Wrote this not long ago... It's based off of one of my favori trance songs...

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Residual Light

I knew this jour would come sooner than I hoped
But I have no need to sob ou gloat
With glittering wings stretched far out behind me
I feel caring, beautiful, soaring, and free
I know that each of toi will start to cry
As I look down while I begin to fly
Mom, Dad, Brother, and Sis.
Each of toi I'm going to miss
But inside of me, I feel something bright
My cœur, coeur has filled with residual light.

link
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ilovemusic29 said:
I SIT THERE starind at a wall

just waiting waiting for u to call

never gonna happen not at all

the phone rings and im boucing off the wall

is it toi no my mother

"u gave me a fright"

oh he called a dit to call him back

i die inside and wake up to find me in him arms he kisses me slightly on the cheek then then of couse then












we break into song





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I don't know why, but I really like this :)
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thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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so do I, nicest...
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MissKnowItAll said:
OK, I can't think of anything good right now, so I'm going to do something...weird:

I was walking down the street
Something steps in front
It's a dinosaur
'Hello' he says
I am suprised
for he is dressed quite snazzily
I run away
I can not deal with snazzy dinosaures right now
Goodbye
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MDR i l’amour it
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lol, weirdly great :)
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Maddy64 said:
Stars By: Maddy64
If toi look up at the Night sky toi will see stars
They light up the sky as children fall fast-asleep
night light for all the fairies
Stars will always be the night sky


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16falloutboy said:
Here ya go:

We could be perfect one last night

And die like étoile, star crossed amoureux when we fight

And we can settle this affair

If toi would shed your yellow, take my hand

And then we'll solve the mystery of laceration gravity....

I can't make poems so well
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suana38 said:
what is l’amour
to me it just a lie
it comes an goes
like winter an spring
u a dit u would be there 4 me but it was a lie
nothing plus 2 say but u left me with a broken heart

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hope u guy's like it
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ShadowQueen013 said:
I wrote this for school last year.

Your imagination is what appeals to you,
toi can say the sky is green because toi know that it is blue,
This is like a world where there is no such thing as time,
And every creature is there just to change your state of mind.

Your imagination is exactly what toi make it,
And the best thing that toi know is that no one else can take it,
When toi drift away to a whole new world toi will fall,
And once all others understand toi they will surely be in awe...
It's a really simple poem but I think I might add plus onto it eventually. Hope toi liked it! :)
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 I wrote this for school last year. Your imagination is what appeals to you, toi can say the sky is green because toi know that it is blue, This is like a world where there is no such thing as time, And every creature is there just to change your state of mind. Your imagination is exactly what toi make it, And the best thing that toi know is that no one else can take it, When toi drift away to a whole new world toi will fall, And once all others understand toi they will surely be in awe... It's a really simple poem but I think I might add plus onto it eventually. Hope toi liked it! :)
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what pretty pic, l’amour it!
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KishuandIchigo said:
A horrible poem but all I can think of at the moment :D

I walk into the woods,
all cut up and dirty,
and a rhyme to that line,
I can't think of a wordy.

My cœur, coeur beating fast,
with Severus dead,
I think theres a Wrackspurt
stuck in my head.

I see a man,
hooded, and cloaked.
He looks alot
like an artichoke.

He raises his wand,
he wants me to die.
I think there's dirt
in my right eye.

He shouts a curse,
and I fall back.
Suddenly everything is black.
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goofiegirl14 said:
its not very good but here u go
why dont toi notice me
always talking about her
that one special girl
the only one can see
blinded to the world
all because of her
when insted it couldve been me
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LunaShay said:
last night i became a poisson in the sea.i swam deep,and my body rippled and quivered and the long barbs around my tiny mouth trailed and tickled.
Above me was the moon,huge and white.Below,the shells of oysters,half open,breathing.And inside them,tiny and shining,there were pearls,in which i saw the glimmer of my reflection.
Deep in the waters,beauty is made from pain.This is something gods should study.



I dont know when i first touched water.
Billions of years ago.
It was hot and burning,a child in a fever,and all at once there was this other,this wetness,a cool hand on my forehead.
Possibly I'm not much of a god,because it was Rain that brought life,dragging it in the clouds.Plants grew,oceans swelled.Creatures swarmed on the Earth and crawled.
Before it came there was no life.
And no death.
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good poem but if there's no life and death, what could possibly there be?
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