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Alright, so I've sorta been playing around with this idea for a while so constructive criticism is appreciated. Hope toi enjoy

    She flew down the empty interstate as fast as she could on that old motorcycle as midnight stars twinkled in sky above. She was running away, just trying to forget what had happened that day. What state she was in, ou how long she’d been driving she didn’t know anymore. It all happened so fast. The phone call, the yelling, the anger, and then everything went blurry and suivant thing she knew her father was lying died on the floor. What did I...

Suddenly the black jet filled with costumed people was swarming with action as they tried to figure out what to do about the enemy about to attack the jet to get to (gulp) me.
"Why don't we just send the girl out as bait? We could always hook her with a tracker and come for her!" the scruffy short man said, folding his arms across his chest in frustration.
The man with glasses that looked like a red unibrow turned toward him, "You know that's not the way we work. If toi want to make suggestions like that, toi can go rejoindre Magneto. He would accept those types of scemes."
The man in the wheelchair...

"Keep running. Keep running." I kept mentally screaming at my legs. They couldn't stop. If they did, who knows what could happen. I rounded another corner. There was that shadow, following me. Shaped like a man, but a man wearing a cape. Who wears capes these days? Totally tacky.
I ran and ran, pumping my legs harder and harder. Finally I rounded a corner, my foot found a pothole, and I went down. Hard.
My arm took the brunt of my fall. Still, despite which part of my body hurt the most, I was down. Now that man in the tacky cape hovered over me.
He held out his hand, "Join me child. toi have...

Author's note: Hi ^^ I've been working on this fanfiction on and off for a little over a year. I was scared to post it because it kind of sucked. I've cut a lot of crap out of it, so its sort of better now. 

This is the first X-Men fanfiction I've ever written. Its kind of a jumble of a whole bunch of different versions of the X-Men. Its not really going to follow the story line of any X-Men media in particular, so some of the event timings might be off. Such as M jour if I decide if I decide to include it. The character ages are also just kind of random. There's just some people I wanted to...

Character Info:

Full name: Theodora 'Teddy' Rain Channing

Nick names: Theo, T, Teddy(preferred), Dora (hates being called this)

Age: 15

Aliases: Eclipse(X-men)

Identity: Secret to to those outside of the X-Men

Relatives Mother, Father, Older Brother, younger sister, and grandmother. Names unknown.

Affiliation: X-Men

Occupation: Student

Citizenship Canada

Birth Place Nova Scotia, Canada

Powers: The ability to manipulate shadows and light. Teddy is able to cast walls of light powerful enough to blind someone (usually only temporarily). She can also manteau herself and others in shadows, making it hard to...