i would end up here with you
i was a restless wanderer on a distant path
toi were a lonely dreamer with a broken laugh
i would go anywhere the road would lead
my hopes and dreams is all that i would need
i don't need a house ou fancy cars
i would rather sleep underneath the stars
toi did'nt have much to call your own
but what a lovely smile on your face shown
toi a dit your chance at l’amour had past toi par
i told i'm here so dont toi cry
our lives were like the pieces of a broken heart
now that we're together what a life could start
there was magic in the air that night
everything was moving at the speed of light
toi were like my juliet and i your romeo
toi l’amour me i l’amour toi thats all i need to know
no longer will toi dream of l’amour thats true
no longer will i wander my chercher has led to you
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd l’amour some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
toi are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as toi lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are cœur, coeur at name.
toi may notice that only the seconde verse rhymes, this is an attempt to montrer the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
toi are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as toi lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are cœur, coeur at name.
toi may notice that only the seconde verse rhymes, this is an attempt to montrer the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
