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16/5/09

Tick-tack…tick-tack… ok… just face it, toi only have 23 days left for the final exam revision, it’s your destiny after all. toi have promised yourself that toi would be able to get an all-pass in this exam.

I really know that I should be plus hardworking, but laziness always defeats the eagerness of revising, what’s wrong with me?? I once saw failure as a shame, how could someone possibly get an ‘F’ even after revising? It’s incroyable and ridiculous, the student must be a retard…yes, that’s how I used to think… well, I still think...

A/N; AHAHAHAHAHA! And toi thought i wouldn't dare ;). Anyways, here's something weird i don't even understand. Seriously. But I'll post it here because I feel happy. Yeah, even I don't believe it. Anyways I'll stop talking 'cause this font is making me feel stupid.

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Breathe. toi need to breathe.

“I can’t.” I whimpered “I can’t breathe. It’s too hard. If I breathe, the numbness will go. I can’t let it go.”

You need to. People are counting on toi to have a heart-beat. And par cœur, coeur beat I mean they count on toi to be here. To have a-little...

****Originally The secrets within but changed title, also I own all rights to my story :)****
Prologue
Look at the world, yeah go on and look at it. Now tell me, What do toi see? Home? Life? Secrets? Death? Anything? Well most people always see it differently. But they never see what’s right in front of them.
When toi look at the world toi always see the small things. toi never see the big obvious things that lurk in the shadows of every dark corner .
Well some of us see it, others… don’t. You’d be surprised par ever secret, every hidden thing yet to be discovered… ou never will.And I...

This is for those who have just begun writing, ou for those who need helpful advice. I hope this article helps you.

1) Spelling and Grammar

Spelling and grammar is the first thing toi worry about. If there are many spelling/grammatical errors, the story doesn't flow very well. toi don't have to be an expert, but toi at least should have a dictionary nearby and know the basic rules of grammar. You'll pick up on plus the plus toi write.

2) Know Your Topic

First and foremost, after spelling and grammar, toi must know what you're écriture about. And I don't just mean a topic in general. For example,...