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Chapter 3

Jeremy POV
Every thing was getting dizzy, I didn’t understand any thing that happened at the house, all I know is Uncle John is dead, there’s two Elena’s and I’m turning.
I could here the car running things were heightened. I could here all the gears moving to a rhythm. Elena was breathing hard I could feel her body heat radiating off of her.
“Elena, I need it now ou its over.” My throat was dry I turned towards Elena and could see her veins flowing with blood. Every thing then went black.”

Elena’s POV
I pulled the car over and took a deep breath. The last time I did this I almost drove Stefan to insanity. I could feel myself sweating. I pulled my hair out of my face. I looked over a Jeremy to find his body stiff and motionless.
I threw off my veste and pulled him closer to me. I held my wrist to his lips he didn’t plus at all. I flung my head in fury. I remember throwing a accueil made first add kit in the gant compartment. I ripped the door off and searched for something sharp. I found a pare of small medical scissors.
I cut my arm fast it stung but nothing mattered but saving Jeremy.
I held my arm back to his lips. His lips twitched a little with in a few secondes his mouth was opening and blood was slowly dripping in.
He grabbed my arm and pulled it closer. He was clinging to tight my arm was starting to change colors. “Jeremy let go for a few minutes we need to get to the Salvatore’s I can’t do that with toi clinging to my arm.
He slowly let go and sat back into his seat. His eyes were shut and he was breathing I knew he was dead.
I turned the car on and stomped on the gas. I few into drive way I turned the car off and ran to Jeremy.
Stefan and Damon were to my side in seconds. “Are toi two just going to stand there ou help?” Damon put his hands softly around my waist and pushed me aside.
Both Damon and Stefan lifted Jeremy up without any effort and brought him into the house.
They laid him on the canapé and turned to me. “What’s going on, I thought toi were going to the hospital to see how Caroline was doing not to bring him?” Damon asked.
My arms were crossed tears were slowly running down my eyes. I turned slowly around to them. “One world, Katherine.” They looked at each other in almost confusion and shock.
I sat them down and told them the whole story.

Damon’s POV
Elena explained every thing down to the finest detail. “So toi don’t l’amour me?” She rolled her eyes not in annoyance but in sorrow. She walked up to me with tears still running down her cheeks. “Damon I do l’amour you, not many people realize what good things you’ve done. Yes I may not l’amour toi the way toi want me to l’amour toi but… I do l’amour you.”
Her tears started to flow fast down her cheeks. I grabbed her and pulled her close around me. Her head sank into my chest as she cried. I leaned my head lightly on haut, retour au début of hers and hugged her tight. “It’s okay, everything going to be okay. I promise both Stefan and I will make sure nothing happens to you.”
I looked up at Stefan who was checking on Jeremy.
An heure later Jeremy started stirring on the couch, Elena instantly ran over to him. “Jeremy are toi feeling okay?”

Jeremy’s POV
I blinked a few times while things came to focuses. The first thing I saw was Elena kneeling beside me. Every fine detail was coming to. couleurs were brighter things were finer.
“Um… ya feeling great. A little different but great.” I sat up felling a little stiff.
Elena’s POV
We got Jeremy up and well to go home. Stefan had got a few blood bags to hold him off while we were at home.
Jeremy went to the car to first. “Thank toi guys.” Stefan hugged me and gave me a sweet Kiss goodnight. “I’m going to see if I can find anything about Katherine I’ll be up in my room. “I l’amour toi Stefan.” He smiled. “I l’amour toi too.” And then he walked up stairs.
I hugged Damon and smiled at him. “Thanks again.” he smiled and kissed the haut, retour au début of my hand.
I walked out the door and shut it silently. I stood in front of it taking a breath.
Slowly I was down the stairs and to the car. Someone grabbed my arm and flung me around. It was Damon I wasn’t sure how I knew but I did. He held me tight, tighter then Stefan ever had and kissed me. I wasn’t sure how to respond. I should be pushing him away but I didn’t want to.
He pulled his soft lips away and leaned his forehead to mine. “Now tell me toi don’t truly l’amour me they way toi l’amour Stefan.”
I stood there still unmoving as he walked back inside.

Katherine’s POV
I was sitting up against the side of the Salvatore house listening to Elena’s little pathetic story. Of course Damon and Stefan believed every word of it. Even caught a glimpse of that little kiss. Maybe I’ll pay a little visit to the boys.

Damon’s POV
I leaned up against the door knowing what I did was wrong. I thought she’d push away but she didn’t was it possible that she did have feelings for me?
“Damon we’ve got trouble, she’s been every where with us.” “Very good Stefan, toi always were the smarter brother, well in ways. Did toi miss me?” Katherine stood leaning against the mur smiling that smile she’s had since the jour I met her.
She look just like Elena and but Elena had beauty not even Katherine could hold.    
posted by VAMPirella1997
This is a peom I wrote for a competition at my school. Tell me what toi think of it, please?


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Have toi felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until toi burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! toi will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.

Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.
 "I could see the sorrow in his perfect blue eyes,something was wrong."
"I could see the sorrow in his perfect blue eyes,something was wrong."
Leonardo.....Leonardo....Leonardo.I just couldn't help but melt like an ice cream cone a on a Texas summer day, as I a dit his name over and over.He was just perfect.But I still had my worries about Lulu.Leo still hasn't explained the hug to me.But I don't want to be pushy with Leo.I wasn't exactly with Leo(yet) but we were jouer la comédie like it.I didn't want to ask him,I wanted him to ask me.But I could tell he didn't want to break the ice.He knew I liked him but he still so nervous(it was so cute to me).I just wished he would ask already,what was holding him back from me?I certainly wasn't,so what...
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I was completely dreading the fact that I had another seven plus hours until I had to face Joel for the first time since that rain incident.I was looking up at Juan's guesthouse bedroom ceiling.It was completely pitch black but yet to me,it a dit so much.It a dit how my cœur, coeur felt and how drained my brain was.The black ceiling stated exactly what I wanted to happen,for it to just stay night forever.Why did I have to go to school tomorrow?Why did I have to see that jerk and his perky,little,annoying girlfriend?I just want to stay here in this bed.

I sadly had three classes with Joel and two with...
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 "Jaslene's Dream"
"Jaslene's Dream"
"I don't feel like going anywhere at the moment Juaney."
The jour after everything had happened with Joel was when the fact that he really was gone set in.I began my grieving I guess toi could say.I was now really hungry for anything I could find and very moody.I could tell my mood swings were definitely getting on Juan's nerves;but Juan wouldn't leave.Juan thought I was going to do something crazy as soon as he left my side so no matter what I did ou what I said,Juan wasn't leaving.
I enjoyed having his company but at the same time,I just wanted to cry and be cœur, coeur broken just for today,but with...
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posted by viju
I'm talking to my friend,
She is my BFF,
And boy, are we having some fun.
We IM back and forth,
We sit on the front porch.
We talk about things on our minds.
We both hate the principal,
The staff and the admin.
At are very sucky school.
We talk about boys,
All our pets and our toys,
And what we wanna do in life.

(Chorus)
She's my BFF,
Well we hold some bets.
We smile while playing sports,
Our favori things are cool shorts.
We talk back and forth
We talk on that porch.
We are bestest friends,
And that will never end.

We struggle through stupid tests,
But we always try our best.
We eat at the lunch table,
We all tell...
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I was bored. I was very bored. There was nothing to do; not a single thing. I grabbed my iPod and turned on the Numa Numa song, but I was still bored. I turned on my laptop and begun écriture a short story, which toi may very well be lire now, but my boredom was left uncured. Riding in the car was boring, and I wished I had a cell phone to text my Friends with, but alas, I was practically broke. I only had around seventy-five bucks, and that was from Christmas. If I had kept my twenty that I had used for IMVU credits, well, then maybe I’d have enough for a go phone at the least. But I had...
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posted by TeanRose424
have toi noticed when toi fall in l’amour it feels like your flying? I have. It the most wonderful feeling in the world. But when do toi feel it? Do toi feel it when toi fall in love, ou when toi just are overfilled with joy?






Have toi ever felt it? ou have toi felt anything close to it? What does it mean? Does it mean that toi have to fly away from it before your l’amour hurts you? ou does it mean that your body enjoys the joy filling your body?





Tell me what toi think...
posted by ashesandwine
I'm not sure if I'll keep this going but if I do, I'll post it on my spot and here:) I still remember posting my first story here! I after sent it to my spot where it's still going, but this was the first place and I thank toi all for receiving it:) Thanks! So I hope toi like this one too:)


"I l’amour you..." Was the last thing I heard from him, as the blade went through his throat in one gracious move. That was it... All that I had ever fought for, all that I knew and loved, Lost in one single move! I was Lost in the darkness, trap in the sorrow and blood...
"I'm sorry..." Was the last thing...
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posted by emmett
A was an Artist who wasted his talent
B rode a Bicycle and was very gallant
C was a Conductor with a musical ear
D was a Drunk, addicted to beer
E climbed Mt. Everest and achieved his goal
F was a Fireman and slid down a pole
G was a Glutton and ate what he got
H was a Hunter, a very good shot
I was an Ice skater with brand new skates
J was called Jane and couldn’t pay the rates
K was a King who ruled all the land
L was a Lady, a white gant on her hand
M was a Milkman who turned lait into cheese
N was a Nanny who made the children say please
O mined Opals and sold what he got
P was a Princess who bought...
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posted by Rob_patt_fan
hey... so this is my new story... I don't like the other one! So... I started this one! don't forget 2 commentaire and rate!

Something was missing. Something big, like my heart! I couldn't find it. I got up from my own screams. I couldn't breathe. He wasn't there to hold me in his cold hands. He wasn't there anymore. I doubted if he would ever come back. I was thinking of everything I could do to get to him. Tears came down of my face and dropped on my oreiller as I tried to stand up and go to the bathroom. Charlie was already downstairs so I hurried and made him breakfast. I didn't eat anything like...
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posted by Office_001
A little peak of sun shone in his window, yes! It was Saturday; Jake Scott loved Saturdays because these were the days when his mom, Terri, and he would go to the park for a picnic. Jake was so excited for today that he slept in his clothes though the were now wrinkled but he didn’t care. Creeping down the hall way quiet enough as to not wake his mom Jake went and made himself his favori cereal. Jake usually had his mom help him get his cereal because he was seven and short that he couldn’t reach the cabinet, but he wanted to surprise his mom, he wanted to make his own breakfast today....
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posted by OneFoggyNight
(Please do note that these are poems I wrote in like two minutes so yeah they might not be that great...)



***You'll never be alone***



Even through the toughest times
Someone will always be there
If toi have Friends
You’ll never be solo
Even if it doesn’t go right
Even if toi think toi might die
If toi have friends
You’ll make it to the end
Even though it all seems to fade
Receding in the darkest night
Having friends
Makes it all go away
Times may be bad
Times may be good
But if toi have friends
You’ll never be alone
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***No Going Back***





Believe not this lie ive told
I am not...
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For those of toi who didn't see my pick, I'm trying to decide whether I should reveal at the beginning of my book, that a main character is going to die at the end. These are three versions of opening paragraphs that I've written. If there's one that toi like the best, let me know in the commentaires ou in the pick.

1. This one gives away the most information, including when she dies and how she's killed:
I had no idea when I started at Skip’s Burger Grill, that on October 22, 2009, sitting there in the walk-in refrigerator, huddled together with my colleagues for warmth, my life would be changed...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 2: the Cullen’s
When I entered, the club my fave song was on so I went and joined the crowed and started dancing with a really cute guy he had blond hair and dark blue eyes that u could swim in them like, forever! We started talking about our past and figured out his name is tom and has two sisters. then I made one up as I did for my school and then he bought me a few dinks after an heure I found myself making out with him I really didn’t like him I just like to spend my time with someone until I break the damn curse and find the one for me, the one that will be my moon and light...
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“Damn nobody in sight yet, I hope Marley and Alec are doing ok” a dit Opal. As she jumped from place to place she saw a young girl between the ages of 17-20, Opal didn’t even speak, and she didn’t need too. The girl was alone so Opal jumped behind her and as the girl turned Opal dug her fangs right into the girl’s neck. At first the girl’s eyes lit up with shock but then eased down into a deep sleep. Opal’s eyes turned the rose colour it does and when she was finished she through the girl to the ground, it has been too long since she drank so she didn’t really care about anything...
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posted by Sweet_Pants
Give away to the morning

Light is here

Look away from the mourning

Is she gone, is she still...?


And let the jour go ahead

Without you

Find a place, a dark space

To hide you

What’s a day, a sunny day

To you?

Fade away, let the your rainclouds

Guide you


There goes the downpour

Long gone your hello...


Find it in you

To make that last stand

It’s a silent drive

It’s her very last one.


Here come the clear skies

There goes your fare well...
posted by Sweet_Pants
Find the casual sun day

Starting with the stumbling wake-up, the strained smile

Smelling the hurried breakfast, bile up her throat

Shrinks away from it, queasy, holding her stomach

Never letting it leave her, the emptiness filling up

Inside her, determined to make it last


Heavy textbooks never all that’s holding her down

Uncertainty sawing through her, the only thing filling

What she considers a burden, but how could hunger

Be so cruel?

It’s drilling into her, snarling, never dulling

Never letting up, just a little longer

A little longer...


She dry heaves, it’s a tiny stall

And the walls are closing...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
If toi spend your life wishing to die, willing to end it yourself, even, and the chance was given, would toi take it? If toi had chosen that fate, when your breath became slow and painful, would toi still wish that on yourself? In the shadow of death, would the reality of it dawn on you, when it was just too late?

A life of darkness was not one worth much, to Taylor.

She had been so desperate to die. Willing to do it herself, had it been possible.

She lifted the couteau to her bared forearm.

The flat, cold edge of the blade pierced the pale skin of her wrist. She felt no pain from it.

The midnight...
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posted by kayleebabee
The flight from New york to Rome took an excrutiatingly long time to land and all the while i was getting plus and plus annoyed with Edward. "as soon as we land we will run to Volterra okay." I muttered quickly braiding my hand through Edwards and sighing contentedly.
"I know that it's just what if we are too late?" his voice broke on the word late.
"we won't be i promise." I didn't know if that was true but i was trying to soothe him i better not voice my true opinion out loud. I half dragged a depressed Edward through the terminals and growled sharply as I saw the bright sunlight outside.
"Oh...
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posted by kayleebabee
Edward and i made the flight to new york with moments to spare.
while the girl scanned our passports through the database i tried to call carlisle. Again.
"Edward your growling stop it." i muttered to low for the human woman to hear.
"right sorry do toi think we will make it in time?" his words were cracked and strained in his effort to keep it together.
"I hope so Edward, I really do." i sighed delicately.
we got to our seats on the plane edward was muttering a stream of profanities.
"It is faster than running." I tried to placate him.
"i know that." he hissed at me.
"Hey don't take this out on me."...
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