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And his hair I l’amour it!” my best friend Selene said. I make a gagging sound. “Oh shut up Gabs you’re going to be like this your boyfriend and I’m going to suffer.” she said. “You want to suffer then let me replay what toi sound like.” I did a horrible impression of her. “Oh no I have to go bye gabby.” she said. When she got up she kicked sand on my arm. “Bye Lena” I a dit a little too late. I looked at the suns refection on the clear blue ocean. I got up to go swimming when someone put their hands over my eyes and a dit “guess who” I knew that voice Brian. I turned around to hug him. “Oh my gosh it’s been two years.” I nearly screamed. “Yup Gabby I want toi to meet some of my friends. Is that ok with you?” he said. “Sure lead the way.” I said. He took my hand like he normally did. We walked about half a mile. Then saw three boys they formed a strait line when they saw me and Brian. “Hey!” the one in the middle called. When we got closer I could see they were as tall as Brain maybe bigger he was about six foot ten. He always towered over me. The one in the middle stepped vers l'avant, vers l’avant and a dit “is this the girl toi were talking about?” he asked Brian. “Yes it is.” Brian answered. Then he noticed how confused I looked and a dit “sorry Gabs. This is Nikko” he pointed to a guy with pitch black hair on the long side and tanned skin. “This is Kyle” he pointed to a boy who looked like Brian: light brown hair slightly pale skin. “And this is Jordan.” he pointed to one with blond hair and light brown skin. They were all quite muscular “Um… nice to meet toi all.” I a dit hesitantly. Then I grabbed Brian’s hand palm up and took a pen from my bourse, sac à main then wrote my number “talk to toi later” I a dit before I dashed to my car and put my bourse, sac à main in the seat. Then dashed back to the ocean I stopped as soon as the water crashed on my feet. I walked slowly till I was waist deep then started swimming when I came up for air I Nikko was there I gasped. He looked down “sorry if I startled you” he a dit with a grin. I grinned back. “Bet I could beat toi to shore. ou are scared?” he a dit “you already know who’s going to win, me.” I said. “So it’s a race then?” he asked “yup” I said. We raced to shore. I won. “Ha ha told you.” I chanted. “So what do toi want?” he asked. “I don’t know. Just leave it at toi owe me?” I said. “Kay but there is a dance would toi come with me?” he asked. “Sure” I was so happy I really liked him. “Let’s go swimming…. Sorry I didn’t catch your name” he a dit looking embarrassed. I giggled and a dit “my name is Gabriella but toi can call me gabs ou gabby.” “Cool then lets go gabby.” then he lowered. “Get on.” he said. I did as he said. We swam for about two hours. “Sorry I have to go help my friend Lena.” I said. “Nah its ok how about I take toi out for dîner on Saturday?” he said. “Ok follow me” I said. We went to my car. Wrote my number on a piece of paper “call me when toi can.” I said. I got on my toes and gave him a Kiss on the cheek. He had a smile on his face. “call toi later beautiful.” he said.
And his hair I l’amour it!” my best friend Selene said. I make a gagging sound. “Oh shut up Gabs you’re going to be like this your boyfriend and I’m going to suffer.” she said. “You want to suffer then let me replay what toi sound like.” I did a horrible impression of her. “Oh no I have to go bye gabby.” she said. When she got up she kicked sand on my arm. “Bye Lena” I a dit a little too late. I looked at the suns refection on the clear blue ocean. I got up to go swimming when someone put their hands over my eyes and a dit “guess who” I knew that voice Brian. I turned around to hug him. “Oh my gosh it’s been two years.” I nearly screamed. “Yup Gabby I want toi to meet some of my friends. Is that ok with you?” he said. “Sure lead the way.” I said. He took my hand like he normally did. We walked about half a mile. Then saw three boys they formed a strait line when they saw me and Brian. “Hey!” the one in the middle called. When we got closer I could see they were as tall as Brain maybe bigger he was about six foot ten. He always towered over me. The one in the middle stepped vers l'avant, vers l’avant and a dit “is this the girl toi were talking about?” he asked Brian. “Yes it is.” Brian answered. Then he noticed how confused I looked and a dit “sorry Gabs. This is Nikko” he pointed to a guy with pitch black hair on the long side and tanned skin. “This is Kyle” he pointed to a boy who looked like Brian: light brown hair slightly pale skin. “And this is Jordan.” he pointed to one with blond hair and light brown skin. They were all quite muscular “Um… nice to meet toi all.” I a dit hesitantly. Then I grabbed Brian’s hand palm up and took a pen from my bourse, sac à main then wrote my number “talk to toi later” I a dit before I dashed to my car and put my bourse, sac à main in the seat. Then dashed back to the ocean I stopped as soon as the water crashed on my feet. I walked slowly till I was waist deep then started swimming when I came up for air I Nikko was there I gasped. He looked down “sorry if I startled you” he a dit with a grin. I grinned back. “Bet I could beat toi to shore. ou are scared?” he a dit “you already know who’s going to win, me.” I said. “So it’s a race then?” he asked “yup” I said. We raced to shore. I won. “Ha ha told you.” I chanted. “So what do toi want?” he asked. “I don’t know. Just leave it at toi owe me?” I said. “Kay but there is a dance would toi come with me?” he asked. “Sure” I was so happy I really liked him. “Let’s go swimming…. Sorry I didn’t catch your name” he a dit looking embarrassed. I giggled and a dit “my name is Gabriella but toi can call me gabs ou gabby.” “Cool then lets go gabby.” then he lowered. “Get on.” he said. I did as he said. We swam for about two hours. “Sorry I have to go help my friend Lena.” I said. “Nah its ok how about I take toi out for dîner on Saturday?” he said. “Ok follow me” I said. We went to my car. Wrote my number on a piece of paper “call me when toi can.” I said. I got on my toes and gave him a Kiss on the cheek. He had a smile on his face. “call toi later beautiful.” he said.
We decided to camp out par a near forest with a small waterfall par it. My burnt hair from the feu was irritating me so I decided to wash my hair in the waterfall. The water was cold, but I didn't care. Bruno felt my hair. I smiled warmly. I a dit like I wasn't a helper " So, where are your parents?' He a dit " Well, after I was born, a witch a volé, étole my mother, killed her, and I have no dad. So I'm an orphan" I thought ' I wish he could tell, he wouldn't have to do this, he wouldn't have to tell me bad mermories.' " I l’amour you." a dit Bruno. " I l’amour a person for a person." 'Well, I'm not a person. Im a helper! Why can't toi tell? Im a helper! I l’amour a person for a person too! But you're not a person! But I l’amour you!'Bruno a dit he would go out to the forest to get get some food. After my hair was washed, I sat down. Why can't he tell I'm a helper? But then, I heard a scream in the woods. I could tell who it was.... Bruno.
this is a heads-up on a story im writing. its about this kid in highschool wh ogoes into this haunted house,then,she turns into a vampire,slowy,and people begin to notice. its awesome.
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now toi know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff vampires rule!
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now toi know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff vampires rule!