Just to clarify for the others in my group story, this is just a prototype. I may ask toi to rewrite this with your characters in it. I'm just starting with my two.
Pt.1
It was a bright and sunny jour on the coast of Australia. The sun was shining, people speckled the shore, and all was well. "Luna! Stop fooling around in the water! Your burger is going to get cold!" Melody shouted to Luna, the youngest of the group. "Oh relax, sis, it's only water. Besides, I can microwave it when we get home, we're not going to be here all jour long ya know" Luna retorted at her big sister. "You are SO stubborn sometimes" Melody shouted to Luna, who was not paying attention. An heure at most had passed, and most of the people had vanished. Melody had been lounging under an umbrella when she heard a distress call from Luna, who was being pulled under the current. It was sunset, and there were no lifeguards on the beach. For toi see, Melody and Luna were on a private part of the beach, owned par their father, Michael Brooks. Melody, tired and aroused from her nap, became immediately awake when she heard the frantic call of Luna. "Help Mel! The current is too strong!" " Luna! I'll be right there Hun!" Melody dived into the water, desperately trying to get to Luna, who was being pulled under par the strong current. Luna was no longer in sight. Melody came up from under the water to see that her sister had gone. "Luna!" Melody choked. "Luna no! I l’amour you! I may have never told toi but I can't lose you!" Melody refused to believe that her sister had died. Which Luna didn't die, but was being pulled through the ocean par a mysterious force. Melody swam further out into the ocean. Melody swam for about a half mile when she felt something pulling on her legs. It pulled Melody under the water.
Pt.1
It was a bright and sunny jour on the coast of Australia. The sun was shining, people speckled the shore, and all was well. "Luna! Stop fooling around in the water! Your burger is going to get cold!" Melody shouted to Luna, the youngest of the group. "Oh relax, sis, it's only water. Besides, I can microwave it when we get home, we're not going to be here all jour long ya know" Luna retorted at her big sister. "You are SO stubborn sometimes" Melody shouted to Luna, who was not paying attention. An heure at most had passed, and most of the people had vanished. Melody had been lounging under an umbrella when she heard a distress call from Luna, who was being pulled under the current. It was sunset, and there were no lifeguards on the beach. For toi see, Melody and Luna were on a private part of the beach, owned par their father, Michael Brooks. Melody, tired and aroused from her nap, became immediately awake when she heard the frantic call of Luna. "Help Mel! The current is too strong!" " Luna! I'll be right there Hun!" Melody dived into the water, desperately trying to get to Luna, who was being pulled under par the strong current. Luna was no longer in sight. Melody came up from under the water to see that her sister had gone. "Luna!" Melody choked. "Luna no! I l’amour you! I may have never told toi but I can't lose you!" Melody refused to believe that her sister had died. Which Luna didn't die, but was being pulled through the ocean par a mysterious force. Melody swam further out into the ocean. Melody swam for about a half mile when she felt something pulling on her legs. It pulled Melody under the water.