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posted by juliet98
Julia beacame a women when she was 12. After she felt powerless for the first time in her little life. It was a sunny day, but in the hearts of the people it was dark. The country was entering in the war, and many youth had to prepare for the battle. Julia and her family, her mom, her dad, and her brother were having lunch. they were silent, Julia behaved badly, she argued with her brother and wanted him to desappear. Suddenly somebody knocked on the door. Her dad opened it and came back in the cuisine with a tall man they didn't know. He was wearing a dark manteau and black boots. He talked with her parents for some time, and when they came out of the other room, her mom was cring and her father was torn apart and she couldn't help it. When the man went away, her parents told her that her brother Joe had to leave for a while. He was 15 and he had to go to the frontier and help the other young soldiers to win the war. Joe was terrified and the only thing Julia could remember was the face of her brother leaving with that man the jour after. There were tears on his face. He gave his mother a long hug and kissed his father and smiled at her, she smiled back with all her love. When the door closed the house was quiet, and it remained this way for some days. They started to talk again one morning when Julia said:- this is my fault and toi are mad at me, right?- her mother looked at her in a strange way, she had never did that before. She didn't say nothing, she just stood up and huged her strongly. -of course it's not you're fault sweetheart- a dit gently her father. She felt relieved but she couldn't understand why her brother had to leave. she never did, not even when she grew up.
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HI EVERYBODY!
it's the first time i write something like this, please let me know what toi think about it! should i write a seconde chapter? are there any mistakes (i'm italian and écriture in english is not that sample...)? the titre is temporary! anyway thank toi so much for your time!! :) let me know!
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