écriture Article: an Angel in hell

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posted by delta117

the summer night was making me sweet thru my trench coat. I was with the other coullge studnets they had made fun of my fear of demons if only they new what my life was then they to would fear the beast but i dot fear them i hate them its commoin like chiens and chats demons and anges evn half anges will allways be enemies. we got to the hole were the suicidel children where suposed to have jumped down to kill themselves. "So jack" nathan began "is this what u were so terrified of " and his lackies all laughed under my manteau i felt the hilt of my traverser, croix daggers not lire to defend my name but to kill the beasts that lived down the hole nathan and his posse were the only ones who know were the hole was at. "suicide slide" it was callled.i spoke in my angelc smooth voice only know it was gravely from the demonioc activity down the slide. " u might want to go" "ha." one of of nathans "friends" a dit "like we r going to let u chien out" and pulled sum spulunking gear from apack and passed it a round. once every one had the hooks and holsters on i spoke again " then this cave will be ur tomb" and with that with none of the gear on i pulled the manteau i was wearing of to montrer my knifes and two swords and jumped down suicide slide. i was in all black suit with six daggers in the shap of crosses 3 were pure or and 3 were pure silverand i had two siver and or swords on my back i pulled the swords out when i fell and hit bottom un harmed for a normal human would be screaming in agoany but since i wasnt i was chanting the owrds of anges my voice angelic this time but after that it returned to its gravely town i heard gasps when they saw i had survied and my suit was white athen looked astonished then i smiled a smile that made him grunt with a false non surprised look at the others and fliped the light on his casque on i was not were ing a buisness suit i was wereing a black ops suit which i got in the ninties i was really 350 years old give ou take a few. after a while i heard the growling the 12 young boys and girls stopped dead in there tracks when they saw it i raised my sword ready to strike when it lunged. it was hideous it had the head of a baby with no eyes a scorpion tail for its tongue a snakes body with centipead legs an averge demon it lunged i swung my twin blades and it shriek with pain causeing screams and cries of fright behind me they started to run bad mistake out of the the demon poured blood black as night i could see in the dark just so u know then plus beasts jst like it came i could not kill alll of them at once so i yelled to the terrified 20 an olds behind me to stop moviing but they didnt listen. soon the demons were on them three were dead beforew i could stop the little monsters and they were much faster then the humans but i few plus words of the old Angel s made them stoped them from the spill of the humans blood and made them see i was half Angel i reseathed my swords and pulled out my knifes 2 of them one or one silver i chanted sum plus and then thru them into the hellish writhering bodies and the y burst into white flames then it was quit i could here crying not many humans were left if plus then one. i saw her she had blood all over herbody and a large cut on her stomach i lifted he r out of the tunnel and used my heavenly magic to heal her and made her think that this was all a bad dream and erased her merory of nathan and his Friends and sent her to a schoo laway from this one how i did this so fast i had wings in no time my mentor and friend in heaven came down "rizoel!" isaid my voice back to my angelic tone "long time no see i have found a demon tunnel it was opened a few years agoby the demons luring in sum young humans and it seems that they have been multplying and not just recing havic. "hmm." rizoel grunted in his equaly angelic voice " that is strange and we will be shutting it down imedietly but i have a question jack do u ever stop par just to chat?" "been busy sorry." i chuckled

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Chapter 1 of My New Story (I Dont Have a Name Yet...)

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

My breath came out in a white, La Reine des Neiges nuage before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just par my luck, someone a volé, étole my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way accueil in the wet night, all par myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
The town was Cassidy....

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True Of The Unforgotten Past: Chapter 4 kidnap For The Deal

posted by MadagascarGirl

After Skipper and Katherine told the story to Kowalski and Rico, they went to theirs beds. But when penguins went inside to their HQ, they noticed Private wasn't in his bunk. The TV was turned on.
"Hello peng-you-ins" a dit a familiar voice. Penguins lookes at the TV.
"Blowhole!" a dit Skipper in angry.
"I kidnaped someone, do toi who?" asked Blowhole and he laughed evilly.
"Private..."said Skipper "If toi hurt him I'll kill toi Blowhole!"
"Oh, I'm scared" a dit Blowhole and laughed again "If toi want save him, toi must come here, alone, without your team"
"I'll came"
"But Skipper..." a dit Kowalski.
"You...

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 2

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my Friends or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz montrer up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade almost...

short murder story wroten par me seconde CHAPTER

posted by juliet98

the first part: www.fanpop.com/spots/true-writers/articles/171410/titl...ter

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help toi sir, are toi sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank toi i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- réponses Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask toi some question...

American and British English

posted by ZekiYuro

If you've learnt British English and you're travelling in the States,or if you've learnt American English and you're travelling in Britain,you'll notice some differences.An obvious difference is the accent,but most travellers find that they don't have too many problems with this.There are some grammatical differences,but they shoudn't make it difficult to understand people,or to communicate.That leaves differences in vocabulary,which can cause misunderstandings.Sometimes the difference is only the spelling,for example,in British English 'center','colour',and 'travelled',and in American English 'centre','color',and 'traveled'.But sometimes the word is completely different in British and American English,and it's good idea to be prepared.

The Hailey Potter Series: What to Expect

posted by dragonsmemory

So, in anticipation of the official release of my Harry Potter fanfic, I've decided to post my hopes for the entires series. It's a little over two monthsuntil the release, folks. I hope to see toi all in the discussion.

IN THE BACKGROUND
Hailey Jane Potter usually doesn't mind being the sister of the Boy Who Lived. But when the most evil Dark wizard in Britain threatens what remains of her family, she has to fight back. This is the story of Hailey's seven years at Hogwarts.

SPOTLIGHT
With the seconde Wizarding War over, it's time to pick up and déplacer on. Some things havechhanged, but others stay...

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The Holy Robbery (oneshot)

posted by thetscfan121

Please comment, I need the comments, writers feed themselves from comments, so if toi don't want to kill me of starvation, please comment.

Lots of bad things happen these days. War, violence, corruption, people confusing SFX for SEX, drugs, death, car accidents, etc,etc,etc. Peter knew of them and a dit that populaire line in puertorrican youth language, "ME IMPORTA UN BICHO!!!" Literally translated, "I care a dick." That's the way things are and that's the way I tell you. Well, Peter had one point against him: he was a catholic. Confirmed, conbined and sealed in paper, he was supposed to be the...

How to Avoid Common Grammatical Errors

posted by IloveMyLord

using correct grammar will make a difference between appearing professional and educated ou uneducated and ignorant. Many people make common grammatical errors when they write and when they speak. Use these steps to avoid the most common errors and sound intelligent and well informed

Tips:

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Make sure that verb tenses match. If the subject is present tense, then the verb must be as well. The same principle applies to past tense subjects and verbs.

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Think about whether the subject is single ou plural. Words like don't, aren't, were, are and were belong with plural subjects. For example, "It don't...

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A Blood's Tale: Part 2

posted by DarkGirl23

The jour my sister died, was the jour I, myself, died as well.

She may not have knew it, but she was my hero.
I guess, however, all big sisters were kind of like that.

I remember seeing it, the body, the blood, the note she left in her own form of representation.
It was written, all across the wall, the note she left behind was in her own blood.

Hatred.
What a word, so different from hated; just a different form.
Which one am I? I should be described as both.
I hate you, and I know toi hate me too. Everyone does.
Here are my final words to you:
Pain is welcoming
Crawling down my arm so slow
Blood that leaks...

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Suji No Shi (Death In Numbers)

posted by narlyvamp1234

Suji No Shi
A girl stands in her home; a hole has been ripped in the wall. She stares at her father in horror, he is covered in blood. At her father’s foot lays her mother, a huge hole ripped in her stomach, and she is dead. Blood drips from her father’s hands… she looked up at her father and, in an instant, he is gone. The girl falls to the ground and starts crying… that’s when she feels a tap on her shoulder. She turns around and sees another little girl, with rose hair and green eyes. They stare at each other silently… not saying a word. The first girl whose mother had been...

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Darkness Locked Into the Heart: Chapter Three, HWSNBN (Who- Shh- Bin)

posted by InvadaMiz

Meggan slapped herself.
"Get yourself together!"She told herself.Kylie came in, Kylie is Meggan's cat.She's only a kitten but has all her colors.She is black with white stripes.
"Oh, hi Kylie."Meggan said.She got out of lit and went into the bathroom.About ten minutes later she got out of the shower, put her clothes back on, and lied down suivant to Kylie.Kylie purred and rolled over suivant to her.Meggan petted her, she smiled at the feeling of Kylie's soft, fluffy, fur.Meggan felt a strange presence.She looked at the side of her bed, and saw Kylie, she looked at the cat she was petting, it had glowing...

The Sinners' Saint (a short story and contest entry)

posted by Aisuanime

Zoeiz took a subtle relaxed deep breathe. And held it just for a moment.

Christ, par highest heaven adored…

The cold blistering air nipped at her exposed cheeks and the tip of her petite nose. A perfect atmosphere for the winters most important day, Christmas.

It was only 7:55 in the morning. Children throughout the modest town would be up par now, pouncing on their drowsy parents, eagerly anticipating on opening the wrapped gifts and stuffed bags.

She breathed out, the vaporous air revealing her breath.

Christ, the everlasting Lord…

Naturally, fresh flakes of snow began to fall from the...

Hidden Secret: Chapter 11

posted by DxCFan123

Me and Marie stood at the edge of Skye's hospital bed. He cœur, coeur was barely beating. I was able to wash off all the blood before anyone saw me. "So tragic, huh? Well, listen, I've got someone to tell you." she said. We sat down and she stared at the ground. "I-I used to know Skye. We knew eachother in Kinder. We were great friends. I know toi two were, too. But, then, one jour she pulled a prank in me. We had to write report. Me and her picked the same thing, but she a dit it was fine and wrote mine for me. But, then, She wrote horrible, horrible things that I told her, as secrets. They caused...

Majestic Magic: Chapter 2

posted by StarWarsFan7

Rosella arrives at her high school and opens her coral locker. "Ugh. I hate hauling this stupid messenger bag!" she says as she tries to get the bag off of her shoulder. "Her? Are toi sure?" A group of boys say just not far away from Rosella. "Yeah. I'm plannin' on askin' her out." The tallest one says out of all three. Rosella secretly had put a spell on her own wand to transform it into a beautiful ring. Anytime she needed it, all Rosella had to do was slip the ring off and chant the code words to unlock the enchantment. "Why do toi want to ask Rosella Karst out? She's a total weirdo. Who...

Vanished- my progressing novel.

posted by ashleigh-jadee

It was a winter’s morning when Nicola realised something strange. It was a peculiar morning, yet she didn’t understand why.
    Nicola called her mum from her bedroom, but she got no reply. She tried a seconde time, and even third time lucky. Yet Nicola still got no reply.
    Finally, after a few minutes of what was an eerie silence, she jumped out of her lit and ran across to her mum’s bedroom. She flung the door open with such force that it made a loud bang, scaring herself at first for sure.
    Nicola took a glance at the bed....

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My Crazy Bounty Hunter Life Ch. 2

posted by tigerseye43

Once I was finally out of the hospital I was afraid to sleep in my own apartment. Kyle asked me if I would like to sleep at his house but then I remembered that last time spent the night at kyle's house. It involved no clothes and a lotnof dirty things I don't want to mention. But I a dit yes anyways, I had nowhere to sleep.
When we got to kyle's house I remembered I had not bottom any clothes. So for pajamas I wore one of kyle's t-shirts and my unferware. For dîner we ordered pizza, delicious. After dîner I brushed my teeth and combed my hair.
I didn't knowtice when Kyle came in the bathroom....

Haunted Tower, Part 1

posted by WildCherryWolf

The Tower of Londres is notorious for it's ghost stories. Its where I live. I get to go to the White Tower whenever I want. I get to hang round the St. Peter ad Vincula chapel. And sometimes, I can get Friends in for free. But this, this is my story. My name is Tallulah, Tara to my friends, family, and you. And this is my tale of terror in the Tower.

I had gotten back from Tudor History with my tutor. I was pretty exhausted, as I had been on a walking tour and class. And I had been called in to help a guided tour, that's the kind of thing we get when we live here. It's only a few of us, but we...

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Boy of Soul chapter 1 part 3

posted by FURRY

Simba sat me down on the floor as he pulled a chew toy out of his manteau pocket and started chewing it *squeak squeak squeak* I opened my eye's, I was hopeing it was all a dream "Mother...." I a dit as I sat up slightly, as I looked around I knew I wasn't it wasn't a dream, I looked over at Simba "....Simba" I a dit as I started cring, I grabed Simba and held him tightly, as my tears rolled down my face Simba put his arm's around "Max...." Simba replied crying a little as well, as we sat there crying over what had happen my chest started to glow again but this time it wasn't purple it was blue...

My Best Friend Is Trying To Set Me Up With My Enemy [01] (slash/boyxboy)

posted by Insight357

Hi, I’m Rayne White, and toi just got a free pass to my inner thoughts, and things going on at the moment. I’m seventeen, hyper, and gay. I’m incredibly sexy with my ice blue eyes, and my long black hair. I’m around 5’9”.

I have a best friend, her name is Lilah Devins. She is like my fag hag. Lilah is a bitch, but I l’amour her anyway. She has long brown hair and brown eyes. Lilah is Friends with most of the gay guys at school, which is all good and well, but she was Friends with my nemesis, Remy Clarke.

Remy Clarke had tormented me since kindergarten. Lilah wouldn’t have me saying...

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Unforgivable Ch. 10

posted by para-scence

I didn't know which way to run. One foot went this way, the other went that way. My knees faltered and locked. I fell to the ground in a mess of tears. I wanted to keep myself open, but instead I cowered in fear. I whimpered when two strong hands grabbed the tops of my arms and lifted me up to my feet. My cries came out in staggered breaths; I hyperventilated. The strong arms pulled me into a hug.

"Oh my fucking...." the voice said, but didn't finish. "Kodi, I swear if I wasn't so happy to see you, I'd kill toi right now." I peered up through my blinding tears at him. Even though I could barely...