Hello, I write vampire stories, will toi read if I post?

My Name is Heidi ou DiDi for short. My screenname is Noodles3378 and I write a story called... My Vampire Story ( It is yet to be titled, any suggestions?) I was thinking about posting it. I have 30 pages and 10 chapters, most of which are short. Would toi read it and commentaire and give me suggestions?
With Lots of Love,
DiDi