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I am stunt. I cannot believe what the “supposedly” Twilight fans are saying about the last book of the saga, Breaking Dawn. When I first finished lire the novel I was so grateful and thankful of Stephenie Meyer. She has giving us the best l’amour story ever written. But as I was searching the net for the opinion of other fans I was shocked. The majority of the people didn’t like the book. They are saying horrible things about Meyer. Oka…One thing is to criticize the novel with a perspective point of view and another thing is insulting and disrespecting Stephenie Meyer.

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I've had great reviews thus far! The Preface is stand-alone and toi can skip it if toi like. ;) Constructive criticism and questions welcomed!!

Rating: T (some violence - we've got monsters! What do toi expect? *LOL*)
Synopsis: Vampires, werewolves, Skinwalkers, and Slayers converge in Forks. This is the continuing story of a Slayer as she struggles to come to terms with her best friend, Bella's impending marriage to Edward, a being that she's been trained to kill.... Will she end up trying to kill Jacob as well?
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Note: This is still a work in progress. I have the Preface and Chapters...

Belward romance won't be possible if their actors don't have the chemistry it takes to portray it. I'm one of those group of fans who hope that KrisRob will start dating. No offense to Kristen's boyfriend but seriously...I could just nosebleed over and over whenever I watch vidéos of them being interviewed and bonding over "Last Tango in Paris" (a movie which is so sexual erotic that it's just hard to believe they watched that together as 'co-workers' only.) Does anybody else agree that this two can make such an adorable couple? Wishful thinking is heartbreaking.

These are just some observations;...

We know how Bella has some serious issues about aging because each an she ages, she becomes one an “older” than Edward. Her fear of aging is borderline neurotic, but it all seems to stem from not wanting to appear older than Edward. I’d always had a hard time understanding this – after all, Edward is well over 100 years old – he just doesn’t look it. And I always thought “So what if Bella becomes a few years ‘older’ than Edward in appearance? No one’s going to be able to tell!” But I suppose it’s a big deal to Bella. To this day, I don’t understand that fear.......

Meg:

Ok.... me and my sister are beyond freaking out right now. We were talking about the end of Breaking Dawn about 15 minutes il y a and then Grace was like "You just watch Jacob is gonna die!" and then we switched to talking about how Stephenie keeps comparing everyone (Edward, Jacob, and Bella) to famus book/play characters who die.

Every last one of them die. Romeo and Heathcliff(Edward), Paris and Edgar(Jacob), Julit and Catherine(damn stupid cul, ass Bella!).

If Bella was to get in some deep trouble and it just so happened that Jacob and Edward went to save her... what if Edward endirect caused...

(end of chapter8)
I was so nerves how charlie was going to react, matt squeezed my hand to comfort me charlie opened the door and gasped he was stairing at me ,not beliving it was me
-Bella?
He wasn’t sure if it was really me and then I heard billys voice from the phone
-charlie charlie are toi ok?
He didn’t respond and turned off the phone
-yeah dad its me
He staired at me again
-you look different!
-yeah two weeks does that to you.
I lied to him
-oh Bella! I missed toi so much I was so worried that I wouldn’t see toi again!
Then I took my hand out of matts and hugged him
-your cold
-yeah its freezing...

Sorry I have'nt written in awhile. I'm also not sick anymore! I'll try to get another chapter up today.
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He just stared opened mouth at me, which in turn making me self-conscience.

"Do I have to drag you?"

He seemed to snap out of it, but it was still there in his eyes. But at least he wasn't drooling, yet.

He went off into the woods to go turn into a wolf. While I waited on the rocks I watched little flickers of my past. It was sad. Nothing good happened since I was a vampire. Except for finding my aunt, but even then it had down-sides....

I'm sorry I haven't been writting as much.
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"Maria?" Alice hissed.

"Yup. She trained newborns, I was one of them. I shouldn't even be alive right now."

Silence filled the air.

"Maria, changed Jasper." Alice looked into his eys.

He nooded.

"If it wasn't for the angels, I would be dead now."

"Angels?"

"Actualy vampires, we do know their names, but we call them angels, because they free vampires."

"What's their names?"

"Peter, and his mate, I keep forgetting her name."

More silence.

"Do toi guys know them too?"

"Yes. He is actualy supposed to be...

salut guys. Sorry the last one was so short and this one is short also. ( I have to get so e sleep) sorry some spelling was wrong too. Would y'all like me to make an end to this Story an start a different one ou keep going with this one? Let me know please.

I was getting really sleepy after watching tv. I looked down at my watch and it a dit that is was 4 am. I hated staying awake this early. Nathen and I were still snugling together, but we were plus casual now. M eyes were getting heavier and heavier par the seconde and soon I felt Nathen pick me up and carry me to the bedroom and lay me on our...

Sorry for the wait! Hope toi like! commentaire and Rate please!!



I put my hand on the door knob and turned it. When I walked in the house was beautiful. It had tall ceilings and tall door frames for Nathen so he could walk through them without having to canard his a head a little bit. It had very nutral walls like kahki and it had color through pillows and recliner chairs. We walked into the cuisine very pretty all stainless still appliences. Our lit room was so pretty a Queen size bed. Nathen walked through each room with me. No one else followed us in though..
This is beautiful, Have toi know about...

Ok people this is my first story ever! Dont laugh please! This is new moon from bellas POV after edward leaves her.I Changed it alot.


Its been 6 months since he left me in the woods after saying the most horrible goodbye in my existence. I want to talk to somebody but i dont know if i can ou if i should eventhink about it.

Its Friday morning,im laying in my lit thinking if i should even get out of lit to go to school today. I have to cause i have a test in History ive been studying for. When i was done with my douche and got my keys i started my truck and drove to school trying not to see the...