Ashely @ Fashion Week Spring 2010 - Alice + Olivia - Presentatio

I didn't know why I came here to Forks, but I felt like I has been here before. I had long brown curly hair and choclate brown eyes. I found a mirror, guitar, and a lamp. I was actually gratefull for the guitar. I loved to play and sing it made me feel happy. I didn't have a lot of money I only brought my savings which was a total of $300. I bought a blonde wig even thought it didn't go with me. I tried to go to lit early for school tommorow but the floor was uncomfortable. I didn't even have a alarm clock how was I supposed to know to wake up. So i kept waking up in the middle of the night...

Black moon
Edward left me. edward left me. I couldn’t cope with it how could he leave me? he loved me didn’t he? I was subbing so hard that I couldn’t breath I was picturing his hard emotionless face when he told me he never loved me ou wanted me every time I thought about him I subbed harder, my hole body was shaking, it was raining and my hole body was wet I was freezing but I didn’t care I rather die than live without him.im crazy the guy left me and I don’t want to live without him!
My body was freezing and my head was about to explode when I heard someone calling my name
-Bella,Bella,Bella….....

I'm écriture a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If toi like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell toi that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice a dit smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....