Twilight <3

Thos is the start of my new story. Please let me know how to improve.XX


My hands began to shake and my knees were bashing together. Why would Aro do this? Alice told me on the plane he would say no, because Edwards’s power was too valuable.
“Bella? Bella!” Alice a dit as my hands clutched the dashboard.

“ALICE, WHY AREN’T toi GOING BACK....YOU a dit YOURSELF THAT YOUR VISIONS WERE UNCERTAIN?” I shouted tears streaming down my face.
We were now half way back to the airport. She has to go back. Just in case she was wrong.

“Alice!” I sobbed.

“Bella. Please believe me, I know it’s...