Tentation

Chapter Five ( writers block strikes again =[)
soz this chapters not as good as the others, writers block =[

Everyone seemed to know. Jake swore he hadn’t told anyone, but news spread like wild feu in La Push. It started off as just gossiping, but had soon escalated to taunting. Leah had conveniently ditched us, but Quil, Jake and Seth stupidly stood par me. I was surprised; they seemed to pick on Jake just as much as me. But Jake took it all in his stride, standing up for me, even though the plus he stood up for me the plus they taunted him. I couldn’t ours it. My Friends were sharing...

I hope toi like this, it's my first fan fiction so please tell me if it's terrible. This chapter is a bit long, the suivant one will be shorter :D

I reached the clearing just after Leah, panting like a steam train. I threw my self to the ground as we past the finishing line.
Still think you’re getting faster Embry? Leah thought tauntingly. I bared my teeth then turned to Seth, Leah’s younger brother.
“Impressive.” He grinned looking at the time on the stop watch. “Leah wins par a nose. 3 minutes 25 secondes for Leah and 3 minutes 30 for Embry!”
We were out in the forest messing around...