E.POV
week ago
Carlise asked me to oversee the vampires in NY. They were coming closer Forks. They pose a threat to all, especially to us. We were afraid of volturi.
It was difficult to stand out with the family, even a week. Bella.. I imagined her sitting suivant to me. I imagined her smiling and laughing. It may sound crazy, but I missed her so much, though only an heure has passed when I saw her. Her brown hair. I missed her brown eyes when she was human. I missed her blush and cœur, coeur beat. But all these things have nothing against my presence with her. I increased speed. Finally I saw NY. It was already dark. I get out of the car and walked in the rue where the last time Alis saw vampire's. I saw five vampire's. Two of them were women. One woman saw me and whispered to other. All of them looked at me.
"Who are you?" Shouted one man, he was new born.
"Vampire, like all of you" One girl smiled seductively. Her thoughts caused me nausea.
"What toi want of us?" asked other man.
"Don't go near Forks." I said, they all laughed. I felt fear in their mind's.
"Or What?" the same woman said. Her thoughts have already started to unnerve me.
"Or I will kill all of you, shred in pieces and burn. toi will scream of pain, and beg for mercy." They all steadied down "Do toi understand?"
"As if toi could overcome us, alone." I laughed, and growled loudly.
"Wanna try?" I challenged. I heard another growl. "So toi wanna fight?" I teased.
"Stop it" I saw a girl, about twenty years, light hair and red eye's. "I will handle with him" I growled, when she went closer to me. I wanted to attack her, but suddenly everything went dark.
I know this chapter is boring, but I don't have time to rewrite it so.. btw thanks for nice commentaires :)
Katie
week ago
Carlise asked me to oversee the vampires in NY. They were coming closer Forks. They pose a threat to all, especially to us. We were afraid of volturi.
It was difficult to stand out with the family, even a week. Bella.. I imagined her sitting suivant to me. I imagined her smiling and laughing. It may sound crazy, but I missed her so much, though only an heure has passed when I saw her. Her brown hair. I missed her brown eyes when she was human. I missed her blush and cœur, coeur beat. But all these things have nothing against my presence with her. I increased speed. Finally I saw NY. It was already dark. I get out of the car and walked in the rue where the last time Alis saw vampire's. I saw five vampire's. Two of them were women. One woman saw me and whispered to other. All of them looked at me.
"Who are you?" Shouted one man, he was new born.
"Vampire, like all of you" One girl smiled seductively. Her thoughts caused me nausea.
"What toi want of us?" asked other man.
"Don't go near Forks." I said, they all laughed. I felt fear in their mind's.
"Or What?" the same woman said. Her thoughts have already started to unnerve me.
"Or I will kill all of you, shred in pieces and burn. toi will scream of pain, and beg for mercy." They all steadied down "Do toi understand?"
"As if toi could overcome us, alone." I laughed, and growled loudly.
"Wanna try?" I challenged. I heard another growl. "So toi wanna fight?" I teased.
"Stop it" I saw a girl, about twenty years, light hair and red eye's. "I will handle with him" I growled, when she went closer to me. I wanted to attack her, but suddenly everything went dark.
I know this chapter is boring, but I don't have time to rewrite it so.. btw thanks for nice commentaires :)
Katie
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.
New Moon in theatres November 20, 2009
