When toi really think about it, Twilight consists of 50% talk about how hot Edward is. 30% of the word "chagrin" and 20% other. Even my English teacher a dit that it's written at a 5th grade lire level, to which I completely agree. Bella and Edward aren't "in love" all they're experiencing is lust, obsession, infatuation. What good does Edward do to Bella? The whole time toi hear about how perfect he is. It's easy to make a perfect character, anyone can do it. Besides, according to SMeyer, Bella is an "independent woman." Well, how is she independent? All of her decisions are based on Edward and how he would react to it. In New Moon, she puts her life in danger to see some form of Edward, you're trying to tell me she's independent? par the end of Twilight this girl is plus than ready to give up her entire life (i.e college, and so forth) for some sparkling freak. Oh and don't get me started to SMeyer's "Well, my vampires are plus scientifical" I wouldn't get on her case if she had never a dit that, but she did. How are sparkling vampires "scientifical"? They're ice cold ALL of the time. That doesn't fit. Everything absorbs body heat, even if it's an inatimant object. Pick up something, and hold it in your hand. Pretty soon,it's going to be at least at room temperature. How about how the vampire baby was concieved? That is NOT scientifical my friends. The number of chromosomes in a vampire's DNA is different than that of a human's. A baby can only be concieved if there are 46 chromosomes. Edward's DNA would have killed Bella's egg off because there wouldn't have been enough ou too many chromosomes. Now all of toi Twihards are going to tell me "OME stop being sooo MEAN! Edward is HAWT and these are the best livres EVA!" Okay, I get it, toi lack taste, but we can fix that. Pick up some QUALITY livres and compare them to your "best livres EVA!" And please, please stop comparing Twilight to Harry Potter. Harry Potter wins any day, hands down. Those livres have a much plus developed plot and people like them not because it has "sexi vampires!" But because it has lasting impressions on everyone and the protagonist is a courageous guy who really cares about people. Harry Potter appeals to EVERYONE not just to 12-18 an old girls. I bet toi if Edward and Jacob weren't "hawt" the fanbase would be gone. And yes, I have read these books, and yes, I did like them for a while so I can actually rant about them. par the way, Bella's initials are BS, which is quite ironic. xD
Hi everyone, I'm back. I just thought I would leave a little note for everyone about my story.... so ok this wasn't my best work. though I'm glad that toi read it, I gives me a feeling of appreciation thank you.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the plus mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The titre of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope toi will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope toi enjoy this,see ya.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the plus mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The titre of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope toi will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope toi enjoy this,see ya.
Hi!
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If toi were/are interested I have news.
If toi are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if toi HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If toi were/are interested I have news.
If toi are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if toi HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)