salut people. heres the long awaited part 6. i finally got it done! i really hope it makes sense because i had to add quite abit of extra detail to make this part make sense and to keep the interest. thank toi all for lire it. i hope toi like it :)
part 5
We made it to forks hospital quickly, for human eyes maybe but the car wouldn’t go fast enough for me.
I walked to the reception and asked to see Charlie, but they wanted to know the relationship between us. It took another half an heure till I could persuade the nurse to let me see him. I took a seep breath before I walked into the room. Right Bella toi can do this. I told my self. I took another deep breath but hesitated, Edward squeezed my hand and gestured for me to go first and then I walked in.
Part 6
I saw him sitting par the window gazing out at the trees that were surrounding the garden. When i walked in he stared at me and Edward in wonder. I hesitated and took a step towards him.
“Who are you?” Charlie asked staring at me.
“Im your daughter, Bella. toi adopted me 16 years ago.” I a dit trying to sound calm.
He didn’t speak for a while but then Charlie asked “how old are you?”
“Seventeen.”
“When’s your birthday?”
“The 13th of September.”
Charlie spent the rest of the jour asking
questions until late in the afternoon when he fell asleep snoring slightly.
I left him a note saying.
Dad:
I miss you. I hope toi remember everything i told you. Please try as much as toi can because I feel like I’m going crazy. You’re the only thing that makes me feel better. I l’amour toi lots and I’ll come and visit toi as much as i can.
Lots of l’amour Bells.
When Edward and I walked out the hospital, it was beginning to get dark. We made our way accueil and stopped outside the white house. Sam and a few others in the pack were sitting on the porch. We discussed what happened with Charlie and then we went into the house for a long discussion that lasted for hours. Most of it was discussing what we should do about Reneesmee. We also discussed Victoria, Laurent and James relatives and whether the Volturi should know about them.
We eventually agreed that the loups were going to the Amazon, Carlisle, Esme, Rose and Emmett will be going to Italy to see if they knew anything. Alice, jasper, Edward and I were going to stay at the house, in case Reneesmee called ou came home.
Over the suivant few days everything was awkward. Alice started to remember something from her past. Something to do with a daughter of someone she once knew. Jasper rang Carlisle because Alice was almost giving up hunting; she became really weak and snappy. Trouble was she was concentrating too much on finding out who exactly this girl was that belonged to her forgotten and dejected past, but nothing came up again, it was just flickers of her past that made no common sense.
I visited Charlie, of course, a few times. He seemed just as forgetful before, but he was getting better, his coming back to his house in four weeks time, Sue will be appointed his carer, as she is his wife.
I was on my way home, it was early evening and of course because it is forks after all, it was raining. Edward was driving fast as i wanted to get accueil to see if Alice had found out anything plus about the visions she’s seeing. As we were getting out the car Edward muttered.
“I was wondering...” Edward thought, hesitantly as he turned into the drive.
“What?” I replied reaching to hold on to his long fingers and looking into his melting golden brown gorgeous eyes. But Edwards’s phone buzzed in my pocket with an unknown number montrer so I thought about ignoring it but then i thought about it and decided to answer, looking at Edward still.
“Hello?” I asked.
“Mom? Where’s Alice? I knew I dialled the wrong number.” Reneesmee a dit when I froze.
“Reneesmee, oh god where are you?” I asked as Edward looked at my face with shock, my face mirroring his. “She’s inside.” I added quickly dragging Edward inside towards Alice.
“I’m fine, call her over...”
“Why?” I answered.
“Because her daughter wants to talk to her and we don’t have a lot of time.”
part 5
We made it to forks hospital quickly, for human eyes maybe but the car wouldn’t go fast enough for me.
I walked to the reception and asked to see Charlie, but they wanted to know the relationship between us. It took another half an heure till I could persuade the nurse to let me see him. I took a seep breath before I walked into the room. Right Bella toi can do this. I told my self. I took another deep breath but hesitated, Edward squeezed my hand and gestured for me to go first and then I walked in.
Part 6
I saw him sitting par the window gazing out at the trees that were surrounding the garden. When i walked in he stared at me and Edward in wonder. I hesitated and took a step towards him.
“Who are you?” Charlie asked staring at me.
“Im your daughter, Bella. toi adopted me 16 years ago.” I a dit trying to sound calm.
He didn’t speak for a while but then Charlie asked “how old are you?”
“Seventeen.”
“When’s your birthday?”
“The 13th of September.”
Charlie spent the rest of the jour asking
questions until late in the afternoon when he fell asleep snoring slightly.
I left him a note saying.
Dad:
I miss you. I hope toi remember everything i told you. Please try as much as toi can because I feel like I’m going crazy. You’re the only thing that makes me feel better. I l’amour toi lots and I’ll come and visit toi as much as i can.
Lots of l’amour Bells.
When Edward and I walked out the hospital, it was beginning to get dark. We made our way accueil and stopped outside the white house. Sam and a few others in the pack were sitting on the porch. We discussed what happened with Charlie and then we went into the house for a long discussion that lasted for hours. Most of it was discussing what we should do about Reneesmee. We also discussed Victoria, Laurent and James relatives and whether the Volturi should know about them.
We eventually agreed that the loups were going to the Amazon, Carlisle, Esme, Rose and Emmett will be going to Italy to see if they knew anything. Alice, jasper, Edward and I were going to stay at the house, in case Reneesmee called ou came home.
Over the suivant few days everything was awkward. Alice started to remember something from her past. Something to do with a daughter of someone she once knew. Jasper rang Carlisle because Alice was almost giving up hunting; she became really weak and snappy. Trouble was she was concentrating too much on finding out who exactly this girl was that belonged to her forgotten and dejected past, but nothing came up again, it was just flickers of her past that made no common sense.
I visited Charlie, of course, a few times. He seemed just as forgetful before, but he was getting better, his coming back to his house in four weeks time, Sue will be appointed his carer, as she is his wife.
I was on my way home, it was early evening and of course because it is forks after all, it was raining. Edward was driving fast as i wanted to get accueil to see if Alice had found out anything plus about the visions she’s seeing. As we were getting out the car Edward muttered.
“I was wondering...” Edward thought, hesitantly as he turned into the drive.
“What?” I replied reaching to hold on to his long fingers and looking into his melting golden brown gorgeous eyes. But Edwards’s phone buzzed in my pocket with an unknown number montrer so I thought about ignoring it but then i thought about it and decided to answer, looking at Edward still.
“Hello?” I asked.
“Mom? Where’s Alice? I knew I dialled the wrong number.” Reneesmee a dit when I froze.
“Reneesmee, oh god where are you?” I asked as Edward looked at my face with shock, my face mirroring his. “She’s inside.” I added quickly dragging Edward inside towards Alice.
“I’m fine, call her over...”
“Why?” I answered.
“Because her daughter wants to talk to her and we don’t have a lot of time.”
For those of toi who don't know me, ou have never read my fanfictions, I'm renesmeblack. I write a story from Renesmee, Jacob, Mine, and occasionally Emmett's POV. Now, I have a ton of bad ideas, and some of the things toi read from me are crash tests. Thankfully, many of my readers enjoy my fanfictions. The dummy is saved!
My stories are for girls who can't stop lire the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I l’amour Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. toi wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, toi read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fans I have, thanks for the support and I'll see toi in the lire section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
My stories are for girls who can't stop lire the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I l’amour Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. toi wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, toi read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fans I have, thanks for the support and I'll see toi in the lire section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
Here's New Moon Confessions. like I a dit before, I don't any of these, I just posté them for people's enjoyments.
#1
I can hear Edward in my head too!
#2
If Edward dies, I headed off to Volterra.
#3
Alice a volé, étole my Porsche.
#4
Jane has my favori vampire power.
#5
I have Edward's soul. *Evil Laugh*
#6
Bella's Epiphany = Stating the obvious.
#7
Edward didn't go to South America. He was visiting me.
#8
I named all of my chiens after Jacob and his friends.
#9
I skipped all of the chapters without Edward in them.
#10
I seconde Emmett's vote.
#11
I cut myself in front of Jasper for fun.
#12
If Bella won't marry Edward, I will.
please commentaire and rate!
#1
I can hear Edward in my head too!
#2
If Edward dies, I headed off to Volterra.
#3
Alice a volé, étole my Porsche.
#4
Jane has my favori vampire power.
#5
I have Edward's soul. *Evil Laugh*
#6
Bella's Epiphany = Stating the obvious.
#7
Edward didn't go to South America. He was visiting me.
#8
I named all of my chiens after Jacob and his friends.
#9
I skipped all of the chapters without Edward in them.
#10
I seconde Emmett's vote.
#11
I cut myself in front of Jasper for fun.
#12
If Bella won't marry Edward, I will.
please commentaire and rate!
When she walked into the dull room i did not notice at first. But suddenly a gush of wind blew her sweet and beutiful scent tingling down my throat. Never had i felt such pain and anguish yet the thrill of a new adventure. She clumsily walked over to the siège opposite me and offered a big smile. This was when i could have killed her, this innocent girl looking at me through the locks of her deep brown hair. Her eyes looked deeply and yet shallowly into mine. This was the moment when i knew i could not ravish her. This was the moment i started to fall in love. The mystery of Love.
Please commentaire and rate!!!! :)
Please commentaire and rate!!!! :)
'Twilight': Which 'New Moon' scene should debut on the MTV Movie Awards?
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | par Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's MTV Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The question is: Which one do toi most want to see? If toi haven't read the seconde book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- ou Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the loup Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | par Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's MTV Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The question is: Which one do toi most want to see? If toi haven't read the seconde book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- ou Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the loup Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.
My favori scene in new moon is the breakup. Now, before toi say I'm not a TRUE twilight fan, think about it. If Edward didn't leave, Jacob would cease to exist(metaphorically speaking, of course). Then, Bella would be staying human. No Renesmee, no wedding, and no Jacob Black. toi might be thinking,well, Edward would change her sooner ou later, right? Wrong. I hope I'm not spoiling anything, but remember in eclipse when Edward a dit he got over his taste for her blood? Do toi remember why? If he didn't leave, he would be too afraid to try. New moon is all about the breakup, and Jacob edging his way into Bella's life. Yep, I'm talking to you, Team Jacob. If toi really like Jacob, toi see things like me.
i hope toi like my story sorry for the spelling and stuff like that im trying my best!!!!!
Rennesme POV
When toi l’amour the one, who left toi no options at all,and change toi campletely how can toi fight with the world to not lose him?
What about if your life depend on the person, what would toi do to tell him what toi really feel about him and that toi want to be with him FOREVER!!!!!!
And toi have just one plus chance to do it!!!!
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Rennesme POV
When toi l’amour the one, who left toi no options at all,and change toi campletely how can toi fight with the world to not lose him?
What about if your life depend on the person, what would toi do to tell him what toi really feel about him and that toi want to be with him FOREVER!!!!!!
And toi have just one plus chance to do it!!!!
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