"Lady"I called my dog.I told my mother to come over and feed her while i was gone. Lady came to me and sat in front of my feet. i patted her head then set the suitcases down.I remembered i haven't talked to my mom sence i was twelve and thats was when her and my father left and i had to stay with my grandma. So i shouldn't say mom i should say Grandma.Susan came in and petted Lady's ear.I Walked around Lady And went straight for the cuisine .It still had the same old painting. That means that Grandma didn't try to fix up my house.I walked up the stairs and went into my room i heard Susan walking up the stairs after me.I turned around and Susan walked in. I listened to her heart.It reminded me of that christmas song we useed to sing.
Thumpity,thump,thump,Thumpity,thump,thump,
down the frosty road.She came in and put the suit cases par the bed.She opened them and before she could grab anything then she moved over to them and i twiched my nose as if i was a evil wich and i moved them again. She looked at me with a playfull look and i just smiled back. i told her,"I will unpack them just go get something to eat. toi haven't aten all day.She walked out and i twiched my nose again. Just a joke to the suitcase sence Susan didn't see it.
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Susan-
I grabbed some pain and mustard.I got some cheese and a couteau to spread it.Ounce i had four peices of pain on the counter i started to spread the mustard. I hearrd Lady coming down the stiars. It was wierd she usauly always stays with Chris.The something wrapped it's arms around me and screamed boo! I jumped and threw the couteau at it i turned around and saw the couteau on the floor.
Then i looked up. Chrises hand was cut and he wasn't even HURT!
He was just standing there looking at the deep cut he had. I started looking for bandages while i raced threw all the cabnets.I opened the closet door and i saw some bandages. They were to small i starte looking thew the stuff.Finally I found gause wrap. I walked to Chris I looked were his cut was. But I noticed something. It was already healing.
I dropped all the stuff i was carying and stared into his eyes.He had a panicked look on his face.
Thumpity,thump,thump,Thumpity,thump,thump,
down the frosty road.She came in and put the suit cases par the bed.She opened them and before she could grab anything then she moved over to them and i twiched my nose as if i was a evil wich and i moved them again. She looked at me with a playfull look and i just smiled back. i told her,"I will unpack them just go get something to eat. toi haven't aten all day.She walked out and i twiched my nose again. Just a joke to the suitcase sence Susan didn't see it.
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Susan-
I grabbed some pain and mustard.I got some cheese and a couteau to spread it.Ounce i had four peices of pain on the counter i started to spread the mustard. I hearrd Lady coming down the stiars. It was wierd she usauly always stays with Chris.The something wrapped it's arms around me and screamed boo! I jumped and threw the couteau at it i turned around and saw the couteau on the floor.
Then i looked up. Chrises hand was cut and he wasn't even HURT!
He was just standing there looking at the deep cut he had. I started looking for bandages while i raced threw all the cabnets.I opened the closet door and i saw some bandages. They were to small i starte looking thew the stuff.Finally I found gause wrap. I walked to Chris I looked were his cut was. But I noticed something. It was already healing.
I dropped all the stuff i was carying and stared into his eyes.He had a panicked look on his face.
hello fanfiction writers
I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of toi guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate toi all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start lire them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D MDR and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what toi write :D*****
I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of toi guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate toi all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start lire them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D MDR and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what toi write :D*****
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im going to put an introduction to this one up today. it has to do with twilight and a band called Paramore(my two fav things-paramore and twilight)most of my Friends like my écriture but when i do post i would like some criticizing commentaires for me to improve with.
Thanks
<3 Danie
Okay beacause I am a huge Twilight fan I have joined this club. I fell in l’amour after the first 3 chapters of Tiwilight and I am still in the process of lire the books. If toi could please at least say in the beginning of your article that it is concerning X books. That would help me out soooo much because I only have a limited amount of time I can read because of school and homework. The mentioning of things that I have not read yet is making me want to read the livres so much plus and it has caused me to get in trouble at school for lire when I shouldn't be. Thank toi so VERY much.