this is a really short one but what i really wanted to do was to get toi guys to really decide on a name for my fanfic.
right now its tied between
endless night and
eternal night
if toi could pls just choose one.
here is the bit ive done...
I led Bella off the plane, still supporting her entirely. I had some idea of the reception awaiting us at Sea-Tac airport. Even though the majority of my concentration was focused on Bella’s weary face, I could still hear the thoughts and feelings of my family.
Relief was the predominant thought of Esme and Carlisle, and I expected nothing less. Jasper and Alice were gazing into each other’s eyes, l’amour rolling off them in waves. Once I might have been jealous of their love, but not now that I had Bella.
Esme and Carlisle waited patiently for us to get to them as we were moving slowly, Bella shuffling sleepily forward.
As soon as we were within reach, Esme reached out and grabbed Bella fiercely. I refused to let go, so the hug was awkward but still filled with love.
“Thank toi so much.” Esme whispered to Bella, and Bella’s mouth came up into a smile.
She quickly moved from Bella to me, hugging me strongly.
“You will never put me through that again.” She nearly growled. She wanted to be angry but all she could feel was relief.
I grinned, repentant. “Sorry, Mom.”
“Thank toi Bella.” Carlisle said. “We owe you.”
“Hardly.” Bella mumbled. I could see she was minutes away from crashing. Finally.
“She’s dead on her feet. Let’s get her home.” Esme scolded me.
I pulled Bella along towards the exit, Esme firmly holding her other side. Bella’s pace was very slow, so Carlisle, Alice and Jasper were waiting in the dimly lit parking lot when we finally arrived.
I looked around for our car, anxious for Bella to sleep, but as I turned I saw Rosalie and Emmett leaning on a black sedan. I stiffened just as her thoughts hit me. I was brought up short when something I didn’t expect reached me.
Rosalie was remorseful. She was sorry for what she had done.
Well I didn’t forgive that easily. She had caused me one of the worst times of my existence, and Bella had been put in danger because of her.
Esme saw me stiffen in Rosalie’s presence and quickly rushed to her aid.
“Don’t,” Esme a dit quietly. “She feels awful.”
“She should.” I answered, keeping my voice loud. She should feel awful.
My words were greeted par sadness from Rosalie, but also understanding. That surprised me again.
I thought Bella had been pretty much out of it and her words came out mumbled with exhaustion, but she still managed to talk.
“It’s not her fault.” She a dit very quietly.
Esme was thankful for Bella’s input. “Let her make amends,” she pleaded. “We’ll ride with Alice and Jasper.” Esme couldn’t stand there being a rift in our family.
I didn’t want too. Who would? Everything that had happened in Italy was her fault. I didn’t want to forgive her.
its a bit short sorry but i really need people to decide on the name. please leave a comment!!
right now its tied between
endless night and
eternal night
if toi could pls just choose one.
here is the bit ive done...
I led Bella off the plane, still supporting her entirely. I had some idea of the reception awaiting us at Sea-Tac airport. Even though the majority of my concentration was focused on Bella’s weary face, I could still hear the thoughts and feelings of my family.
Relief was the predominant thought of Esme and Carlisle, and I expected nothing less. Jasper and Alice were gazing into each other’s eyes, l’amour rolling off them in waves. Once I might have been jealous of their love, but not now that I had Bella.
Esme and Carlisle waited patiently for us to get to them as we were moving slowly, Bella shuffling sleepily forward.
As soon as we were within reach, Esme reached out and grabbed Bella fiercely. I refused to let go, so the hug was awkward but still filled with love.
“Thank toi so much.” Esme whispered to Bella, and Bella’s mouth came up into a smile.
She quickly moved from Bella to me, hugging me strongly.
“You will never put me through that again.” She nearly growled. She wanted to be angry but all she could feel was relief.
I grinned, repentant. “Sorry, Mom.”
“Thank toi Bella.” Carlisle said. “We owe you.”
“Hardly.” Bella mumbled. I could see she was minutes away from crashing. Finally.
“She’s dead on her feet. Let’s get her home.” Esme scolded me.
I pulled Bella along towards the exit, Esme firmly holding her other side. Bella’s pace was very slow, so Carlisle, Alice and Jasper were waiting in the dimly lit parking lot when we finally arrived.
I looked around for our car, anxious for Bella to sleep, but as I turned I saw Rosalie and Emmett leaning on a black sedan. I stiffened just as her thoughts hit me. I was brought up short when something I didn’t expect reached me.
Rosalie was remorseful. She was sorry for what she had done.
Well I didn’t forgive that easily. She had caused me one of the worst times of my existence, and Bella had been put in danger because of her.
Esme saw me stiffen in Rosalie’s presence and quickly rushed to her aid.
“Don’t,” Esme a dit quietly. “She feels awful.”
“She should.” I answered, keeping my voice loud. She should feel awful.
My words were greeted par sadness from Rosalie, but also understanding. That surprised me again.
I thought Bella had been pretty much out of it and her words came out mumbled with exhaustion, but she still managed to talk.
“It’s not her fault.” She a dit very quietly.
Esme was thankful for Bella’s input. “Let her make amends,” she pleaded. “We’ll ride with Alice and Jasper.” Esme couldn’t stand there being a rift in our family.
I didn’t want too. Who would? Everything that had happened in Italy was her fault. I didn’t want to forgive her.
its a bit short sorry but i really need people to decide on the name. please leave a comment!!
Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal Friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can toi imagine being shown up par someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after lire a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal Friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can toi imagine being shown up par someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after lire a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant rayon, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant rayon, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant rayon, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant rayon, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.
But after lire all four livres I feel in l’amour with them. I wasn't a fan of the écriture style ou the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in l’amour with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I l’amour the ending to Breaking Dawn. And l’amour New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favori author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to l’amour HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before lire Twilight...and just suddenly realized my écriture was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm écriture a vampire novel that I hope to publier in the near future.
