Ok so I'm not too good at reviews but lets see what I got.
Twlight:
The start of Twilight is the Cullens hunting I think that is a gret start but what could have been another great one? Maybe one of Alices visions ou Bellas nightmare? Then Bella digging a cactus I l’amour it! I think it is something toi woud do to have a little bit of accueil with toi and phil calling I l’amour toi both but we have a plane to catch sutch a typicall guy! Thenn when Bella was with charlie and they were talking about her hair growing so funny! Then when Bella hit Jake with the truck and didn't give a damn that was also funny. At school Jessica was so jaulous<- soz bout spelling. When she seen Edward in Biology toi could feel the tension from then on. The baseball scene suivant then..... With Rose and Emm so funny and cute but when the three others come up well toi cant help but scream. Then the ballet scene soooo scary but I was so realived when Edward turned up and felt so sorry for him when he had to drink Bellas blood. The hospital was such a sweet scene. And finally PROM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 The best scene ever it was soo sweet!!
Twlight:
The start of Twilight is the Cullens hunting I think that is a gret start but what could have been another great one? Maybe one of Alices visions ou Bellas nightmare? Then Bella digging a cactus I l’amour it! I think it is something toi woud do to have a little bit of accueil with toi and phil calling I l’amour toi both but we have a plane to catch sutch a typicall guy! Thenn when Bella was with charlie and they were talking about her hair growing so funny! Then when Bella hit Jake with the truck and didn't give a damn that was also funny. At school Jessica was so jaulous<- soz bout spelling. When she seen Edward in Biology toi could feel the tension from then on. The baseball scene suivant then..... With Rose and Emm so funny and cute but when the three others come up well toi cant help but scream. Then the ballet scene soooo scary but I was so realived when Edward turned up and felt so sorry for him when he had to drink Bellas blood. The hospital was such a sweet scene. And finally PROM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 The best scene ever it was soo sweet!!
To the Readers of my fan Fictions:
Alright listen...I know I promised I will post but I can't post anything right now...I just got accueil from the plage and I have to go to the hospital for my sister and myself...she got really hurt and I hit my head on the plage floor and on a boogie board so now I am really dizzy! Plus I am worn out from almost drowning!! Sorry I will try to post tomorrow and I will try to make it long! Hope I am feeling better par tomorrow...And I pray to God I don't have a concussion
-Kayla
Alright listen...I know I promised I will post but I can't post anything right now...I just got accueil from the plage and I have to go to the hospital for my sister and myself...she got really hurt and I hit my head on the plage floor and on a boogie board so now I am really dizzy! Plus I am worn out from almost drowning!! Sorry I will try to post tomorrow and I will try to make it long! Hope I am feeling better par tomorrow...And I pray to God I don't have a concussion
-Kayla
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
BuffyFaithfan1
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[SIX]
"By killing you."
I jumped up and started walking backwards, how could I trust Tabra if he was going to kill me!?
"What?" I asked.
"I mean, I'll call them up and bring toi to them, after they think I'm back on their side, we pull out the big pistolets and kill them before they kill us."
OH MY GOD, BIG SIGH OF RELIEF!!! Am I right? "Oh," I sat back down and we fished out our game plan.
Two hours later, we had a good, solid plan that will work perfectly...if they buy the fact that Tabra is "back on their side". It seemed like a good plan, and even though I knew that I'd be the main subject in this little cat-and-mouse game of deadly horror, I knew it was the best thing to do.
I looked at Tabra as he asked me if I was up to doing this. I looked him in the eye, and said, "Yes, I am."
Volume One
BuffyFaithfan1
_____________________
[SIX]
"By killing you."
I jumped up and started walking backwards, how could I trust Tabra if he was going to kill me!?
"What?" I asked.
"I mean, I'll call them up and bring toi to them, after they think I'm back on their side, we pull out the big pistolets and kill them before they kill us."
OH MY GOD, BIG SIGH OF RELIEF!!! Am I right? "Oh," I sat back down and we fished out our game plan.
Two hours later, we had a good, solid plan that will work perfectly...if they buy the fact that Tabra is "back on their side". It seemed like a good plan, and even though I knew that I'd be the main subject in this little cat-and-mouse game of deadly horror, I knew it was the best thing to do.
I looked at Tabra as he asked me if I was up to doing this. I looked him in the eye, and said, "Yes, I am."