ok so im riting a story and it starts out after renesmee and jake are married, read and commentaire i no its alot.

When I was done and looking descant I sucked in a big breath and descended the long staircase, Jacob saw me and the instant he did his whole face lit up. It looked like just seeing me changed his day, from a bad one - one of stress, of anger - to the best jour of his entire life. He ran up to me and scoped me up into his arms. "Where did toi go?" he yelled even though I was in his arms still. "I wake up and saw that toi went there, I thought toi ran away!"
    I almost did, I thought. No it was wrong to make his jour worse, I'd tell him about the baby after the thing with Sam got worked out. "I couldn't sleep." I a dit then tried to smile weakly and failed. I jumped out of his arms and ran to the bathroom. He came after me, probably too stunned to say anything, and waited in the corner as I was violently sick.
Thats all i got im not done tho