anybody willing to read my fanfics and leave constructive criticism?

i'm aspiring to be an auteur someday so i start with écriture fanfiction. i do write my own original stories, but i don't feel comfortable posting them on the internet just yet. but it'd be much appreciated if any of toi Supernatural tv montrer fans would read my fanfics & leave your reviews and commentaires about it!

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story 1:
Schizophrenia - "dean toi really are here, right?" "of course I am, why wouldn't I be?"
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story 2:
Destination Unknown - Kaz and Eva l’amour the tv montrer Supernatural. And par love, they mean mildly obsessed. What happens when these two fangirls are somehow transported into the tv show? At least this universe is made up of hot boys - can't say so about their college, though.
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story 3:
Dear Dean - in which she writes him letters in hopes that he's still there. [ season 10 (may become slightly au since only a few episodes are out ] [ demon!dean ]
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story 4:
Calamitous - "what is depression like?" he asked, frowning. she sighed, "it's-it's like drowning. but toi can see everyone else around toi breathing." [castiel/oc]
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thanks again in advance! :-) i'd really appreciate feedback since i want to improve my écriture skills