chant My original Song- It hurts! par Ellie Cowell ( my real name)

wierdgem7 posted on Jun 05, 2011 at 04:32PM
*Verse 1*
It hurts when I see you with her
And I know its rude, but I have to
stop and stare
*chorus*
But every time I look at you,
I feel like I'm in love
But it still hurts
It hurts

*verse 2*
Is lonely me?
Is lonely me?
Is lonely what i'm destined to be

*Chorus*


*verse 3*
When I try to get It right
It just ends up in a fight
So why don't I just stop trying?
Because it feels like i could be dying?

* Chorus*


Is love supposed to hurt?
Nothing I've ever felt
Has hurt like this
Do you know what I'd do
For a kiss?

*Chorus* (x2)






Hi there! Did you like it? I dont like it myself.. but i want to know what you think!

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il y a plus d’un an GrenadeGirl337 said…
sunny
Maybe make it a little longer? i dunno.
il y a plus d’un an wierdgem7 said…
It sucks. I know it does!
il y a plus d’un an applies112 said…
zzz
that made me fall asleep
il y a plus d’un an zaedenwild said…
whats the tune?
il y a plus d’un an webkinzluv said…
smile
i have the same problem with writing short songs. but it is a nice song.