chant This is a song i wrote do toi like it?

EastendersRox posted on Mar 13, 2011 at 06:38PM

Here i am picking berries off a tree
how much more lonely can i be?,
Life is hard and it hurts,
it makes my cry and i wounder why?
oh i wish i could fly....away from here,
sore in the sky i want to fly,
i always wounder why?

Sometimes i cry oh i wish i could fly,
as i lie on my bed and dream
i dream of flying in the night sky,
ohhh oh,
lost in the wind,
im flying my dream,
there are stars in the sky
everywere they are so close i could touch themmm,
im liveing my dream for the first time and its changed everything
my feet are of the ground
im spining around
my dream is crazy carzy,
but meeeeee

i jst though of that on the top of my head do you like it? plz comennt

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il y a plus d’un an EastendersRox said…
do u like it
il y a plus d’un an kittencutie119 said…
it seems like more of a poem hun. but it is great dont u worry bout that. give it some notes, work wit the wordin a bit and tape some music for it and im sure it'll be great! cant wait to hear it!
il y a plus d’un an wierdgem7 said…
I like it
Tell us when uve done
il y a plus d’un an zaedenwild said…
i like it whats the tune?
il y a plus d’un an michael58 said…
It's amazing....I like!!!I like it a lot....!!!!Great job....!!!!;)
il y a plus d’un an RiverIce said…
yeah whts the tune??? i like it
il y a plus d’un an dxcgleek3 said…
yea I love the mood!
il y a plus d’un an webkinzluv said…
it's short but awesome. picking berries of a tree? i'm sorry but it's a bit ramdom.