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Is this good?

I watch the sky slowly turn pink.
As the sun sets the west,
18 years have come and gone,
did i use them to their best.

No! Truthfully I didn't,
I waisted quite a few,
But what can't be cured must be endured,
My God how very true.


when I weigh the good against the bad,
I know that I have won
For I will have got a wife who cares, My daughters and my sons someday.

So keep your precious jewels,
Your mansions and your land,
I judge them as a trifle,
Not worth a grain of sand.

A life of l’amour and a l’amour of life,
and the health to see it through,
Means plus than all such riches,
Believe me friend its true.

This life is like the morning mist,
toi see it then its gone,
Its passing is relentless,
Evening, night and then the dawn.

So set aside some time for you,
and use this time to think,
How many things in life can change,
each and every time toi blink.

Sit so silent in the firelight,
Watch the tiny sparkles fly,
Oh so silent play the shadows,
As the embers glow and die.

Take your chances grasp and hold them,
As the clock of life ticks on,
if toi don’t my friend, I warn you,
Look away and they are gone.

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cool eric'
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sidlow said:
thats truly inspiring. beautiful and so so true. toi have a great way of looking at things:) thanks for posting that. it was a blessing to read such a good slice of truth. well done:)
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alicecrazygirl said:
i like it, i think its goo. :)
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peterslover said:
*big smile* This is wonderfully written Eric :)
toi have wisdom and insight of life in your young age :)
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HaiSuG96 said:
This was really pretty, I swear. I wanted to cry when I read this, but mostly because of how amazing it is. toi are an awesome poet, Let's welcome the suivant Shakespeare!
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rachel_lobjd said:
OMG is completly GOOD!!!!! i have no words its idk it makes u tnk ab many tngs :'(
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demon_wolf said:
That was really good. =DDDD
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Bite_Me_Tender said:
oh my god i l’amour it!!! Awsome job
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stephmfan215 said:
omg thats amazing!!! did u write that?? its really great and true and just... wow.
This life is like the morning mist,
toi see it then its gone,
Its passing is relentless,
Evening, night and then the dawn.

thats probably my favori line. ou maybe the one about sparks and embers. toi should definitely keep going with poetry. its truly a talent of urs!
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how do i make it one of my favorites?
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irena83 said:
Great,i like it..
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maryshen said:
if i am to vote, i vote for you(Eric) -- for the poem toi make. it should have been titled 'This Is Good'!
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