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dose anyone write poetry!! post a poem here!( will get a prop)

life sucks and i need soemthing to get my mind off it. anyone have a depressing, inspireing, weird any kind of pioem to post they wrote??!
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demon_wolf said:
I do! ^^
Here are three that I have done recently.

Stolen l’amour :
toi never told me, that toi were a thief.
Because toi a volé, étole my cœur, coeur away from me.
toi never told me, that toi were a thief.
Because toi took my breath away.
toi never told me, that toi were a thief.
Because toi took the words from my mouth.
toi never told me, that toi were a thief.
Because toi took the rose from my cheeks.
toi never told me, that toi were a thief.
Because toi a volé, étole my will to speak to you.
toi never told me, that toi were a thief.
Because toi a volé, étole the controls to my emotions.
toi never told me, that toi were a thief.
And………………………………...........
And I never told you, that I am a thief too.

A Fairy Tale Love:
In a fairy tale
I'm the one
Who will do
Anything for my love.
Behind the magical
Volts of electricity
Our fingers intertwine,
And our lips touch.
There's a whisper
In my ear,
"I will forever
And always l’amour you."
Because In a fairy tale,
He's the one
Who will do
Anything for the one he loves.

Peaceful Darkness:
Maybe it's because
On the way
Into the darkness,
I considered
Whispering "Stay here."
The only problem is,
I don't stay awake,
Sleep comes too fast.
When exhaustion consumes me,
It then hits me
In my dreams.
For some reason
It wasn't toi
I was whispering to.
My soul cries out
Making it hurt,
My head goes blank.
toi want me
To stay.
In the peaceful darkness
I stay.
Your words didn't reach me in time.


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my favs the first but there all good! check out my new poem( its a answer)
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E-rock said:
He suffered for years

My eyes are filled with tears

But unable to cry

I stood par and watched him die

I hated myself for not trying to lend a hand

But I didn’t know what to do

He suffered from an addiction each day

I didn’t say anything and I pretended like everything was okay

I knew for so long That there was something wrong

As he grew plus distant from me

Then that jour when I saw the pictures of him getting high

It was a sight that I couldn’t bare to see

So I made myself believe that he couldn’t

And he wouldn’t Hurt me that way I was living a lie

Months passed by

And finally he came clean

And promised toi would quit

Though he kept it

And it hurts me to say

The addiction is what killed him

I all I could do is pray

That God won’t take my best friend away

But He did

God relieved him from his suffering

I want him here with me

But when I saw him there

He was so free from the pain

I couldn’t wish him back, so he could suffer again

toi had an addiction

And it kills me to say

The addiction is why you’re not alive today

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 He suffered for years My eyes are filled with tears But unable to cry I stood par and watched him die I hated myself for not trying to lend a hand But I didn’t know what to do He suffered from an addiction each jour I didn’t say anything and I pretended like everything was okay I knew for so long That there was something wrong As he grew plus distant from me Then that jour when I saw the pictures of him getting high It was a sight that I couldn’t bare to see So I made myself believe that he couldn’t And he wouldn’t Hurt me that way I was living a lie Months passed par And finally he came clean And promised toi would quit Though he kept it And it hurts me to say The addiction is what killed him I all I could do is pray That God won’t take my best friend away But He did God relieved him from his suffering I want him here with me But when I saw him there He was so free from the pain I couldn’t wish him back, so he could suffer again toi had an addiction And it kills me to say The addiction is why you’re not alive today
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awww. thats so sad it made me want to cry.
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awwww, *tears coming down* X'( I LOVED IT
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K5-HOWL said:
Okay now i éditer this so no one can steal my poem sorry people
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thats good!
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Puppetmaster111 said:
Bad dreams

toi are tired so toi go to bed,
and toi rest your head.
But when your asleep toi see a blaze
toi dont know whats happening so toi go into a haze! Goblins tease toi monsters chase toi
it is not a good place so toi turn blue.
When toi wake toi start to cry and wander why.

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Paramore-CSI said:
umm I have 50 milion
FALLING
1000 POUNDS CRUSHING ME
HOLDING ME DOWN
SUFFICATING ME
EMPTYNESS
DROWNING ME
FEAR
COVERING ME
LONLYNESS
HURTING ME
HOW CAN I SURVEVE
LIFE LEAVING MY BODY
ENVY
SWALLOWING ME
WHY
WHY DID toi DO IT
HOW COULD toi
LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME
LOOK
LOOK AT YOUR DAMAGE
PLEASE
PLEASE BABY
HOW COULD toi DO THIS TO ME
AFTER EVERYTHING I DID FOR toi
HOW COULD toi CHEAT
HOW COULD toi
BABY WHY
WHY DID toi LEAVE ME?
BABY WHY
toi KILLED ME
toi STUFFED MY BODY INTO THE COFFIN
IT'S YOUR FAULT
toi HAVE TO LIVE WITH MY PAIN
MY SORROW
WHY DID toi LEAVE ME?
...............................
Lost
ALONE
INSUCURE
BLOOD DRIPPING DOWN MY FACE
BRUISES STINGING MY TRANSLUCENT BODY
DEATH CALLING ME
l’amour DETACHING FROM ME
MY cœur, coeur BEING RIPPED FROM MY BODY
MY MUCSLES HURTING
A SICK FEELING IN MY STOMACH
IN THE FETAL POSISTION
TEARS ESCAPING MY EYES
MUSCLES TENSE
BARE FOOTED
SCABS BREAKING
ROOTS STABBING MY BODY
GLASS BROKEN
A PICTURE ON THE FLOOR
REMINDING ME OF MEMORYS
OF A FOREST
OF OUR OLD LIFE
WHEN toi LOVED ME
GRABBING A couteau
DRAWING BLOOD
FROM MY FACE
MY LIFE FLASHING BEFORE ME
THE PAIN OF EVERY SAD MOMENT
MADE ME MAKE MY DISSISION
I DREW THE couteau TO MY NECK
SLIT MY throat
AND WATCHED THE BLOOD POOL AROUND ME
LIFE DRAWING OUT OF MY EYES
MY SOUL
RISING FROM MY BODY
GOD EMBRACING ME
THE LOOK IN YOUR EYES
WHEN toi FOUND ME
I WAS Lost
.......................

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wow! amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing!
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awe thanks
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viju said:
If I l’amour toi very much excuse me
If toi are who I just want excuse me
Sorry if I count the Stars at night
Sorry if I say much :Love You
Sorry if I pick up fleurs for toi every morning
Sorry if I am very less for Your Eyes
toi are an Angel and if I am just an Adam
Sorry if I Die and Alive for You
If I be Ashamed with my Insanity
Sorry if I put toi under the care of GOD
Sorry if I don’t want to montrer toi to the Moon and don’t want to say anything of toi to the Night and don’t give toi to the Sky
Sorry if I want toi just for myself
Sorry that I am Less but I fall in l’amour with toi too Much


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 If I l’amour toi very much excuse me If toi are who I just want excuse me Sorry if I count the Stars at night Sorry if I say much :Love toi Sorry if I pick up fleurs for toi every morning Sorry if I am very less for Your Eyes toi are an Angel and if I am just an Adam Sorry if I Die and Alive for toi If I be Ashamed with my Insanity Sorry if I put toi under the care of GOD Sorry if I don’t want to montrer toi to the Moon and don’t want to say anything of toi to the Night and don’t give toi to the Sky Sorry if I want toi just for myself Sorry that I am Less but I fall in l’amour with toi too Much
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well i just think that if i am a guy and just have to say beautiful words to a girl! and just wrote it down! between i'm not a guy!
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CREDDIECHANNY said:
Blood
Cold, Dark
Ruby-red in the moonlight
Death trickling down

Tears
Crystal mirrors
Reflection of sorrowful memories
Desperation of being heart-broken

Hope these are good enough!! :)
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Shelly_McShelly said:
here's a short funny one i found in a book:

roses are red,
violets are blue,
some peoms rhyme,
but this one doesn't!


lame, i know but if u want something to cheer u up, its great!
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hehe i have one like that roses are black violets are blue, toi better wacht ur make someone might though a brick at you.
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HAHA THATS FUNNY!! :)
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hehe. it cheered me up!
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KatiiCullen94 said:
I remember the times of the i l’amour you's
and times when it was i hate you.
But toi come back begging at me feet.
And when my pity defeated me.
and the sweet seranades, in our matching shades.
My rose collection, evidence of your effection.
The sheets unmade, from the nights toi stayed.
The child in me, from the times toi loved me.
The debt toi owe, from using the word borrow.
The times i was scared, was the time toi spared.
And this dress i wear, in which are people become aware, that toi are gone, and withdrawn.
The memories i hold, they are written in bold.
my broken heart, from when toi apart.
so rest now my love, up now from above.

And this is too laura.(migutza2006):)

Never too far but oceans apart,
The letters i treasure, they are close to my heart.
The chats ill wait, and staying up late.
Learning from you, adn using words i already knew.
Sometimes your there and somtimes your not, but there is always commentaires on my spot.
I hope toi succeed in your uni degree, and live happily.


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hannah_vampire said:
my poems are crap but ok.
i wait:
i wait alone
i wait to here the rain
i wonder if you're ever
coming home.

i sit here alone
thinking of all the stuff
we had done and wonder
what went wrong.
i wait for the phone to call
i wait to hear toi say 'i l’amour
you',
i wait to hear toi call my name.

but i've waited long Enough
i cant wait no more
i see toi could have never loved
me because toi never called.

this one dont have a name:
i see the dark
i see the night
i hear the cry's
i hear the screams.

i cant see no light
i cant seem to find my way.
i feel the wind
i feel the cold
i'm getting pulled into deep.

were do everyone go
all i feel is cold
i cant fight no more
i cant hear my name in the wind
i cant feel free
what has gone wrong
i cant even breath.

sorry for any spelling mistakes =)




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toi GUYS R GUD, I WISH I CUD DO THAT, MIME IS....KINDA PLAIN AND DNT montrer COPASSION, OTHERS THINK SO BUT I DNT, NOT REALLY PROLLY ONLY.......2?3?
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amans15 said:
i write......songs, im about 2 record them and grt them on the internet and have my own website, my sister says she likes them and she describes them as:"pure gold!!!" 5 stars, we edited 1 the other jour but it still needs work
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u should give me a link
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orangeturnip said:
toi may reconise this one of mine:

THE HOLE

salut you
I see the dark hole
Within me.

It grows darker
It talks clearly
The un-child like state of me

The sad side
Locked away
Until I feel catastrophic

The happiness around the cavern
Of my heart
Is much plus shallow

The happiness is the surface
The crust is my confusion
The hole feels so bad because its so deep

so there’s plus to me than just a hole
I am a whole in bits of three.
Separated but together at times.

Why must the darkness rule
We all know that life is cruel.
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Caitlin1996 said:
I think people should do poattry because it can express your feelings !!!!!!!!!
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