salut I was wondering if you'd read the preface to my new story and tell me what toi think. Please and Thank you.
Hey guys, I'm just trying to write a story people are into so please just be honest. And if toi hate it don't be afride to commentaire that.
Darkness was already begining to take over. It had only been two months after we had found the book of lies. And already it had taken over two of us. We only had three left. Jessykia,Mari and me, Lauri. We where the three the book talked about. The last three living. They called us. We where the last chance of light. Our world was overcome with blackness. As the book a dit it would. Sometimes I wished Mari, Jessykia and I had never went with Beth and Gina. Jessykia had always senced they were evil. We were not normal. toi could say. We were powerful. And the book didn't like that. Mari and Jessykia could read people. But I Had much deaper power. I could controll people. And us the 'last three living' each had a power over a natural wonder. Jessyka was fire. Mari, was air. And I was water. And We The 'last three living'. Had to save our world, from the Book of lies.