Can toi guys tell what do toi think of it?

a poem that sounds like a scream
a sadness inside ,
a message from your soul
a sad cry
but poems can be from the heart
can also be ...
from a position of empathy of anothers pain
either way i hope toi can see
the sun is shineing (i wish looks likes its gonna storm)
any way i didn't want to write a short answer
i wanted to express that i loved it
but in doing so i
waffled and draged out my responce un neccercererly long and Lost my sence of spelling with the pain of brain freezing numbness

any hoos

this is for toi
♥
and dont break it.

this is nice. really. i read poésie quite a lot and i'm a rather harsh critic but i do believe that this is pretty good. i mean, it's not Whitman ou Shakespeare ou whatever and you'll have to work hard and practise a lot to develop your talent, but this is 'you', toi know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words and it is quite beautiful...if toi polish it a little bit, it will be really good. nice job:)

"you will never understand when i hush then"

I l’amour how toi did this line, l’amour the word hush too. ♥♥♥

wow, i think thats a really good, and about the soul poem, i like it!

It's another beautiful accomplishment. Truly a fascinating write.

Hi "irena83",
Thank toi for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! toi sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes l’amour is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!!
So your neither wacko ou weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of toi and keep letting them out!!!

Pretty. Are toi écriture it from past experiences from someone that hurt toi ou just because toi can?

I l’amour it! good job! :)