Oh, my god. I can tell a lot of toi are going to hate me if toi have read the story considering the amount of people that l’amour it. I just finished lire a MLP shipfic that was not just aléatoire as hell, but it was borderland stupidity. The story, is the overrated garbage that is only known as Spike's arc en ciel Dash.... Please be merciful in the comments.
Why do I hate this story so much... Well, first of all, I didn't find the opening enjoyable at all. Of course, the shipfic is a dead give away to who the shipfic involves (Honestly, toi don't even have to think. Its as obvious as can be) Though, even if it didn't have the obviously predictable title, the story spoils the whole story in only ONE FUCKING minute INTO THE FANFIC!!! I'm not kidding, it literally just happens out of nowhere. Also, the shipping is stupid. The shipfic involves Spike and arc en ciel Dash (Lets face it, it was obvious to the beginning) and how make a bet to see who can make the other fall in l’amour with the other... Sounds like it would lead to funny antics, right........... Well, I think Lex Luthor put it best. WRONG!!! Pretty much one character gets every character to start betting on who will win the bet. And, toi get to see such characters as Vinyl, Octavia, Diamond Dogs, Trixie, Iron Will, Berry Punch, a cockatrice.... Wait, what... Yes, even Everfree forest creatures can place bets. Even Princess Celestia and Princess Luna bet. ARE toi FUCKING KIDDING!!! These are not at all the princesses we've come to know and love. Their just greedy gamblers. And who would this poney be that caused this gambling problem... It would be Pinkie Pie... Yes, Pinkie Pie actually puts here Friends privacy and dignity in danger for a good laugh....... Not going to start getting mad just yet. And, also, Spike and arc en ciel Dash keep preventing each other to make the other fall for them so long, that the gamblers just (You wouldn't believe it if I told you) Start having a flame war over who is better... And, this is the fault of Pinkie. Okay, now its time to get mad. I'm going to say something thats going to piss toi all off, but I got to say it. Pinkie Pie in this fanfic is a total stupid bitch! Yes, toi heard me right. She's stupid for making this plan without worrying about the troubles it would cause for everyone, but she's a chienne because she thought about laughter before her Friends safety. I still l’amour Pinkie from the show, but fanfic Pinkie, FUCK YOU!!! And, finally, after ten chapters of that shit, we get to the last chapter where arc en ciel and Spike have a moment that is in every shipfic............. right? Again, quoting Lex Luthor WRONG!!! I'm not even joking when I say that the scene where Spike and arc en ciel open up to each other is the shortest chapter in the whole fanfic. I am dead serious. And they just sit watching the sun, and, it would seem, their eyes don't burn up par doing so. And........... Thats it. What happens to the flame war? What will happen with Spike and Rainbow? Why is Pinkie Pie a chienne in this? Who won the bet? How did this game cause so many problems? WHY ARE THEIR SO MANY sans réponse questions THAT NEED ANSWERS?!
In conclusion, this story is god awful. Its one of the worst, if not the worst MLP shipfic I've ever read. But, hay, thats only my opinion. What's Your Take