Last story was halfway good, so this time I'm making it to where Blue Bolt's personality is fully revealed in this story. It all starts with Bolt arriving in Ponyville. He is new here, so he doesn't know much about the town ou the residents. He is very shy, so he was nervous to talk to anyone. He thought his way of speech would make him appear weird. So he enters the house he was promised par some poney who had blue curled hair and wore red glasses. He doesn't know who she was, but he will learn soon!
Bolt: This is a nice house. Who was she anyways? I just hope the residents are nice...
It is daytime, and he nervously looks outside, seeing many different ponies walking around and socializing. Pinkie Pie, who wants to find someone new to play with, goes to the house that used to be empty.
Pinkie: Hello? Anypony home? Can I come in? OK!
Pinkie opens the door(which was surprisingly unlocked) and walks around. She spots several pieces of paper on the ground, followed par several drawing utensils. She is amazed par this.
Pinkie: Whoa! This guy ou girl must be quite the artist! Rarity wouldn't believe this!
Bolt is hiding from her, because he is shy around girls. He watched her pace back and forth, and accidentally blasts out a rayon, ray from his horn.
Bolt: How do they control these things?
Pinkie: Huh? Someone there? I coulda sworn I heard a discharge of magic. Maybe he ou she is a unicorn! Would toi like a cupcake? You're a shy one...
Bolt: Yes...I would like one....
Pinkie: YIKES!! Who are you!?
Bolt: I'm a new resident. I'm B-Blue Bolt. Please don't hurt me.
Pinkie: ? Your'e just like Fluttershy! I'm Pinkie Pie! toi like parties?
Bolt: I'm not into parties. People might think I'm weird.
Pinkie: toi need to get out more. I like your name! Cool cutie mark. See toi later, Bolt!
Pinkie leaves, leaving Bolt to make a decision. He chooses to go walk around town and see what it's like. He is still nervous about talking to anyone. He heads for Carousel Boutique to ask for help, but isn't sure how to present the question.
Rarity: Thanks, come again, darling! (notices Bolt) Hello, can I help toi with something....Aren't toi that shy unicorn I gave that house to? It's suivant door to mine.
Bolt: Um....I suppose so. I didn't see your house, I'm new here...
Rarity: Something wrong, darling? I can montrer toi around.
Bolt: (blushes) My, your beautiful....whoops!
Rarity: (blushes) Goodness, how kind of toi to notice. toi should go see Fluttershy. She's shy too. I'm sure she'll be great Friends with you. That's what we're all about. Friendship!
Bolt walks outside, still blushing. Rarity was a beautiful pony, and he almost embarrassed himself. He just hopes he didn't look awkward in front of her! As he is walking around getting to know what's what and where, a blue pegasus with arc en ciel hair runs into him in mid-flight. It was arc en ciel Dash. Uh-oh...
Bolt: Excuse me....
Rainbow: Hey! Do toi mind watching where your'e going? I almost broke my wing again...Huh? Are toi that unicorn who lives in the house suivant to Rarity's?
Bolt: Um....
Rainbow: What's the matter? Can't toi talk? Your'e weird! (takes off)
Bolt: This isn't going well. She sounded like she wanted to kill me!
Bolt goes around shyly asking where Fluttershy's house is. He goes to her house, not knowing whether she was like arc en ciel Dash ou not.
Bolt: (rings doorbell) Here we go...
Fluttershy: (opens door) Hi....Who are you?
Bolt: Uh...I'm Blue Bolt....Sorry, I get nervous around girls.....
Fluttershy: It's fine. I'm shy too.
Bolt: No way! That's awesome! par the way, toi know the poney with the blonde hair and wearing a cowboy hat?
Fluttershy: Applejack?
Bolt: So that's her name...Well, I caught myself looking at her, and when she looked at me, I blushed and ran.
Fluttershy: So toi like her?
Bolt: (blushes) Y-yes. It's my secret.
cidre fort, applejack walks in, bringing in a look of surprise.
AJ: What the hay? Are toi that unicorn who was lookin' at me? toi ran off without sayin' anything!
Bolt: Oh no, another violent one...
AJ: What? I'm not like Dash, not one bit. Do ya like me sugarcube?
Fluttershy: Oh, my....(looks at Bolt)
Bolt: (blushes) Um...oh gosh..yes.
AJ: Well, aren't ya' sweet! (kisses Bolt)
Fluttershy is stunned.
AJ: Congrats, big boy. I'm your girlfriend. See ya later!
Fluttershy: Um, what just happened?
Bolt: l’amour happened. She's so cute! I'm off to see more.
Bolt sees a purple unicorn being followed par a small purple dragon. It was Twilight and Spike.
Twilight: Spike! I told toi to not eat the ingredients like a thousand times! We haven't even gotten accueil to start cooking....
Spike: Sorry, I was hungry....
Bolt: Hello....
Twilight: Hi! I've never seen toi before. toi new here?
Bolt: Yes, and so far only arc en ciel has me at a distance.
Spike: Hey, he wears glasses, and he's a unicorn. He can help toi with spells.
Bolt: If I knew how to control this stuff....I almost zapped Pinkie par accident!
Spike: Can I try on your glasses?
Bolt: I need them to see.
Twilight goes to tell Celestia about Bolt, followed par Spike. Meanwhile, arc en ciel is flying and sees Bolt.
Rainbow: I hope he doesn't hate me for what happened earlier. I can be so stupid sometimes! Hey, new guy!
Bolt: Oh, it's you. Are toi going to yell at me again?
Rainbow: It was just an accident, I get carried away sometimes. I'm arc en ciel Dash, the fastest flyer in Equestria! What's your name? I see toi have quite a unique cutie mark. toi fast?
Bolt: I'm Blue Bolt. I'm one of the fastest among unicorns, probably. The thing I'm truly good at is drawing. Gaming is just one of my activities. Drawing is my main hobby.
Rainbow: Cool! We should hang out sometime, Bolt. toi got yourself a friend.
Bolt: seconde friend. Fluttershy's my first friend.
Rainbow: No problem. I'm ok with it.
Bolt is now becoming plus confident after taking a walk around Ponyville. He met the mane six (he met Pinkie at his house), and had a good idea what was where. He is still shy, but is also confident. He is in l’amour with Applejack, who loves him back. His personality is shy, cool, and admires girls, not to mention secretly competitive. Maybe at some point he'll have ground races with arc en ciel Dash! This is about Bolt learning about Ponyville, what everyone is like, ad where everything is. I tried making it sound like Ponyville didn't revolve around him.
Bolt: This is a nice house. Who was she anyways? I just hope the residents are nice...
It is daytime, and he nervously looks outside, seeing many different ponies walking around and socializing. Pinkie Pie, who wants to find someone new to play with, goes to the house that used to be empty.
Pinkie: Hello? Anypony home? Can I come in? OK!
Pinkie opens the door(which was surprisingly unlocked) and walks around. She spots several pieces of paper on the ground, followed par several drawing utensils. She is amazed par this.
Pinkie: Whoa! This guy ou girl must be quite the artist! Rarity wouldn't believe this!
Bolt is hiding from her, because he is shy around girls. He watched her pace back and forth, and accidentally blasts out a rayon, ray from his horn.
Bolt: How do they control these things?
Pinkie: Huh? Someone there? I coulda sworn I heard a discharge of magic. Maybe he ou she is a unicorn! Would toi like a cupcake? You're a shy one...
Bolt: Yes...I would like one....
Pinkie: YIKES!! Who are you!?
Bolt: I'm a new resident. I'm B-Blue Bolt. Please don't hurt me.
Pinkie: ? Your'e just like Fluttershy! I'm Pinkie Pie! toi like parties?
Bolt: I'm not into parties. People might think I'm weird.
Pinkie: toi need to get out more. I like your name! Cool cutie mark. See toi later, Bolt!
Pinkie leaves, leaving Bolt to make a decision. He chooses to go walk around town and see what it's like. He is still nervous about talking to anyone. He heads for Carousel Boutique to ask for help, but isn't sure how to present the question.
Rarity: Thanks, come again, darling! (notices Bolt) Hello, can I help toi with something....Aren't toi that shy unicorn I gave that house to? It's suivant door to mine.
Bolt: Um....I suppose so. I didn't see your house, I'm new here...
Rarity: Something wrong, darling? I can montrer toi around.
Bolt: (blushes) My, your beautiful....whoops!
Rarity: (blushes) Goodness, how kind of toi to notice. toi should go see Fluttershy. She's shy too. I'm sure she'll be great Friends with you. That's what we're all about. Friendship!
Bolt walks outside, still blushing. Rarity was a beautiful pony, and he almost embarrassed himself. He just hopes he didn't look awkward in front of her! As he is walking around getting to know what's what and where, a blue pegasus with arc en ciel hair runs into him in mid-flight. It was arc en ciel Dash. Uh-oh...
Bolt: Excuse me....
Rainbow: Hey! Do toi mind watching where your'e going? I almost broke my wing again...Huh? Are toi that unicorn who lives in the house suivant to Rarity's?
Bolt: Um....
Rainbow: What's the matter? Can't toi talk? Your'e weird! (takes off)
Bolt: This isn't going well. She sounded like she wanted to kill me!
Bolt goes around shyly asking where Fluttershy's house is. He goes to her house, not knowing whether she was like arc en ciel Dash ou not.
Bolt: (rings doorbell) Here we go...
Fluttershy: (opens door) Hi....Who are you?
Bolt: Uh...I'm Blue Bolt....Sorry, I get nervous around girls.....
Fluttershy: It's fine. I'm shy too.
Bolt: No way! That's awesome! par the way, toi know the poney with the blonde hair and wearing a cowboy hat?
Fluttershy: Applejack?
Bolt: So that's her name...Well, I caught myself looking at her, and when she looked at me, I blushed and ran.
Fluttershy: So toi like her?
Bolt: (blushes) Y-yes. It's my secret.
cidre fort, applejack walks in, bringing in a look of surprise.
AJ: What the hay? Are toi that unicorn who was lookin' at me? toi ran off without sayin' anything!
Bolt: Oh no, another violent one...
AJ: What? I'm not like Dash, not one bit. Do ya like me sugarcube?
Fluttershy: Oh, my....(looks at Bolt)
Bolt: (blushes) Um...oh gosh..yes.
AJ: Well, aren't ya' sweet! (kisses Bolt)
Fluttershy is stunned.
AJ: Congrats, big boy. I'm your girlfriend. See ya later!
Fluttershy: Um, what just happened?
Bolt: l’amour happened. She's so cute! I'm off to see more.
Bolt sees a purple unicorn being followed par a small purple dragon. It was Twilight and Spike.
Twilight: Spike! I told toi to not eat the ingredients like a thousand times! We haven't even gotten accueil to start cooking....
Spike: Sorry, I was hungry....
Bolt: Hello....
Twilight: Hi! I've never seen toi before. toi new here?
Bolt: Yes, and so far only arc en ciel has me at a distance.
Spike: Hey, he wears glasses, and he's a unicorn. He can help toi with spells.
Bolt: If I knew how to control this stuff....I almost zapped Pinkie par accident!
Spike: Can I try on your glasses?
Bolt: I need them to see.
Twilight goes to tell Celestia about Bolt, followed par Spike. Meanwhile, arc en ciel is flying and sees Bolt.
Rainbow: I hope he doesn't hate me for what happened earlier. I can be so stupid sometimes! Hey, new guy!
Bolt: Oh, it's you. Are toi going to yell at me again?
Rainbow: It was just an accident, I get carried away sometimes. I'm arc en ciel Dash, the fastest flyer in Equestria! What's your name? I see toi have quite a unique cutie mark. toi fast?
Bolt: I'm Blue Bolt. I'm one of the fastest among unicorns, probably. The thing I'm truly good at is drawing. Gaming is just one of my activities. Drawing is my main hobby.
Rainbow: Cool! We should hang out sometime, Bolt. toi got yourself a friend.
Bolt: seconde friend. Fluttershy's my first friend.
Rainbow: No problem. I'm ok with it.
Bolt is now becoming plus confident after taking a walk around Ponyville. He met the mane six (he met Pinkie at his house), and had a good idea what was where. He is still shy, but is also confident. He is in l’amour with Applejack, who loves him back. His personality is shy, cool, and admires girls, not to mention secretly competitive. Maybe at some point he'll have ground races with arc en ciel Dash! This is about Bolt learning about Ponyville, what everyone is like, ad where everything is. I tried making it sound like Ponyville didn't revolve around him.