it this ok (my mj poem)

in the literacy class toi had to make a poem about our favori artist. i suck at poems so i wanted to ask if this was ok it's ok if toi don't like it i'm just glade i was able to write a poem
it's called never forget
we miss toi everyday. Oh how people wish toi never went away. toi were one of the most precious gifts we'll ever know, but i guess it was your time to go. toi gave us years of beautiful music. that we'll always love, and we'll never forget that sparkly white glove. it's true toi were one of a kind. i'll never forget being six and watching toi moonwalk across a stage. i knew toi were extraordinary at the age. now years later toi are gone, but it's ok because everyone moves on to that better place. a place were toi don't have to deal with lies and hate. it's true toi will be strongly missed, becasue when michael jackson died the world cried, but we'll never forget