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I am écriture this letter to the New York Senate. Could toi help me éditer it ou give any advice? Do toi think I was too rude about it? Thank you.

Here is the letter:


To the New York Senate,

I am completely and utterly ashamed that toi have voted down the same-sex-marriage bill on December 2nd of 2009. It is not only unjust, it is not only morally wrong, and it is not only discrimination against a minority just because they are slightly different. It goes against several laws and rights of the United States of America.

By denying same-sex-marriage, toi are not only denying these couples a titre of...