I hope toi like this! if its bad
i dont blame you. Im not really a good writer
I used some things I read from different jemi articles.
i decided to change it.
" salut get away from me" Joe yelled at two bullies that cornered him at lunch.
"We will go away as soon as toi give us your lunch money" One of the bullies a dit in a cold tone ". toi win" Joe a dit in deafeat he handed the boys his money. " Iike taking Candy from a baby" The other bully a dit in a moking tone as they walked away.
I sat down alone at a table, tableau no one liked me just because im new! Joe thought. But then a little girl with a sweet voice a dit " Is this siège taken?" "No" i a dit shyly " toi want half of my lunch?" She askId "No thanks im not hungry" As soon as i finished that sentence my stomach started growling!
"You sure" She a dit lokking at me as if i was lieing (i sorta did lie though) " Why do toi care?" I said. "Because i was a new kid its not very fun people always teased me"she a dit in her sweet voice.
"Oh" I said. She tryed again to get me to eat. "Fine" he a dit again in deafeat. She gave him half of all her lunch. They talked while they ate. " Whats your name?" She asked. "Joe". "Whats yours?" Joe asked. "Demi"she anwsered
"Were do toi live" she asked. Joe told her. "Really I live on the same street!" Demi answered quickly "Really!?" "Maby we could hang out" Demi a dit "i mean if thats ok with you" She added. "No that would be great!"Joe a dit exited! "You can meet my brothers!" Joe a dit getting plus exited par the second!
"You have brothers?" Demi asked. "Yeah three Nick,Kevin and Frankie but he is just a baby."
"Lucky! Ive always wanted brothers ou sisters!" Demi a dit sorta uppset. "Well I have a friend that is like a sister." she added. "Her name is selena""
When lunch was over Joe and Demi a dit good bye to each other. When school was over Joe's mom picked him up. Joe told his mom and brothers about Demi. "Well that was nice" Joe's mom a dit sweetly. "Yeah I can't wait too meet her!" Nick a dit happy.
When they got accueil the three brothers went over too see Demi. Demi answered the door. "Oh hi Joe Joe Joe!"
then I snapped back to reality they are 17 now and dating
"Joe lunch is over were going to be late for class! The cloche, bell is gonna ring any seconde now!" Demi a dit trying to get me up.
*bell rings*
"Sorry Demi I was just thinking about how we meet" I a dit
"I will never forget that jour just think 11 years il y a to this jour we meet in this cafateria!" Demi a dit smiling.
"yeah" I a dit
* the cloche, bell rang again*
"we better go" I a dit
just as we walked out a little boy sat right were joe sat when joe meet demi he looked really sad. Then a little girl walked over to him and a dit "Is this siège taken?"
i dont blame you. Im not really a good writer
I used some things I read from different jemi articles.
i decided to change it.
" salut get away from me" Joe yelled at two bullies that cornered him at lunch.
"We will go away as soon as toi give us your lunch money" One of the bullies a dit in a cold tone ". toi win" Joe a dit in deafeat he handed the boys his money. " Iike taking Candy from a baby" The other bully a dit in a moking tone as they walked away.
I sat down alone at a table, tableau no one liked me just because im new! Joe thought. But then a little girl with a sweet voice a dit " Is this siège taken?" "No" i a dit shyly " toi want half of my lunch?" She askId "No thanks im not hungry" As soon as i finished that sentence my stomach started growling!
"You sure" She a dit lokking at me as if i was lieing (i sorta did lie though) " Why do toi care?" I said. "Because i was a new kid its not very fun people always teased me"she a dit in her sweet voice.
"Oh" I said. She tryed again to get me to eat. "Fine" he a dit again in deafeat. She gave him half of all her lunch. They talked while they ate. " Whats your name?" She asked. "Joe". "Whats yours?" Joe asked. "Demi"she anwsered
"Were do toi live" she asked. Joe told her. "Really I live on the same street!" Demi answered quickly "Really!?" "Maby we could hang out" Demi a dit "i mean if thats ok with you" She added. "No that would be great!"Joe a dit exited! "You can meet my brothers!" Joe a dit getting plus exited par the second!
"You have brothers?" Demi asked. "Yeah three Nick,Kevin and Frankie but he is just a baby."
"Lucky! Ive always wanted brothers ou sisters!" Demi a dit sorta uppset. "Well I have a friend that is like a sister." she added. "Her name is selena""
When lunch was over Joe and Demi a dit good bye to each other. When school was over Joe's mom picked him up. Joe told his mom and brothers about Demi. "Well that was nice" Joe's mom a dit sweetly. "Yeah I can't wait too meet her!" Nick a dit happy.
When they got accueil the three brothers went over too see Demi. Demi answered the door. "Oh hi Joe Joe Joe!"
then I snapped back to reality they are 17 now and dating
"Joe lunch is over were going to be late for class! The cloche, bell is gonna ring any seconde now!" Demi a dit trying to get me up.
*bell rings*
"Sorry Demi I was just thinking about how we meet" I a dit
"I will never forget that jour just think 11 years il y a to this jour we meet in this cafateria!" Demi a dit smiling.
"yeah" I a dit
* the cloche, bell rang again*
"we better go" I a dit
just as we walked out a little boy sat right were joe sat when joe meet demi he looked really sad. Then a little girl walked over to him and a dit "Is this siège taken?"