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Twilight "mistakes"

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Maybe that will open up a few peoples' eyes a little bit...

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cassie-1-2-3 Yes, I don't see a problem here. Please tell me that it's completely wrong and unusual for the word "eye" to appear four times on one page. Then, I'll challenge you to look through every page of every Harry Potter book to verify that this same thing never happens. My eyes are opened so wide right now.

twilightlover73 ^Did it mention anything of the word "eye"? She's saying that she's narrating every movement, I don't see Rowling saying "Hermione's eyes narrowed at Harry" or "Harry could see Ron's eyelash on his cheek"

cassie-1-2-3 Well, all the sentences with the word "eye". I figured she was trying to show "overuse" of the word. But please, look through all the Harry potter books and be sure that Hermionie's eyes never narrow. not even once.