Dr. Spencer Reid

Okay so I wrote a fan fiction and before i really posté it I wanted feedback because i don't want to end up having a bad story.
Well here it goes!

Chapter 1
Spencer Reid's Point of View :

It was 1:05 in the morning and Spencer had woken up with a cold sweat, apparently the case the team and him just had was pretty bad. It was about nine an old girls that were being raped and murdered in Anna, Texas with roughly a population of 1,225 people everyone is connected. Turns out a local forth grade teacher was targeting girls while in school, he then looked up the girls addresses in the school's...

>> I can tell toi know, this is my 6:30 AM too much Criminal Minds idea.... It starts out as a kinda everyone story but it goes into a plus of a Reid superhero, good guy, savior, person thing... I don't know. Well thanks for at least lire this and I hope toi like the actual story. (* hoping toi didn't kinda leave after lire this alone*)


JJ looked over the current unsolved crimes going on around the world, when one especially caught her eye. "Everyone into the briefing room," she spoke into her walkie-talkie. She walked straight into the briefing room, going to the front, JJ noticed...