château 5x08 After Hours CTV Promo

I decided to make my first fan fiction about château and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." château a dit looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" château stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." château whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." château a dit turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't toi sleep with...